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Unwritten Absence

His absence, like a book I put down, not caring to know its ending, resounds with merely empty silence. No anticipation do I feel for that man’s return. He left me, but our love that flowered once upon a time now lies withered on the ground. It’s as if he never existed, and as I write this poem, our love continues fading into oblivion. Like this very poem which very few eyes shall ever see, he is going, going, gone. I could easily unwrite this, so that all remains is unwritten absence.

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Date: 9/29/2023 8:05:00 AM
Very nice Congratulations
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Date: 9/29/2023 6:40:00 AM
Wonderful, achingly wonderful. Love it. Congrats and God bless you, Andrea. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/29/2023 2:18:00 AM
I love the flow and depth of emotions expressed here in this poem for unwritten absence, creative and very evocative. Seamless rhythm and very touching how you’ve especially written “ our love that flowered once upon a time now lies withered on the ground” i felt that! So well expressed for the prompt. Thank you for writing, congratulations on winning
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/29/2023 9:43:00 AM
Thank YOU
Date: 9/27/2023 3:47:00 PM
Wow. This is brilliant. I love the word choice and the defiant energy! Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 9/27/2023 2:31:00 PM
Some relationships are better forgotten--when there is no joy in memories. I like your take on the contest theme, Andrea.
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Date: 9/26/2023 3:54:00 AM
He must be a person of no importance to be forgotten so easily. As a poem, cleverly done. Hugs.
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:01:00 PM
My unasked question is did you write This in invisible ink.?? Lol))) Hope you Are not feeling too old after the reunion.? And other pleasant wishes dear compatriot.' God bless and guide you.'
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:03:00 PM
Then I say" No not Andrea." No it's not that easy. But this arouses the possibility.
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Date: 9/25/2023 10:09:00 AM
An unwritten written poem. Nice one.
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Date: 9/25/2023 5:59:00 AM
The unwritten is written..and you are on your mettle. Appreciated. Love.
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Date: 9/24/2023 11:11:00 PM
Great take on the contest - I love the idea of a person being a book you put down, that resonates a lot and could spark a lot of poetry! Good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/24/2023 9:49:00 PM
I appreciate your idea about unwritten absence. More I appreciate your current contest. Actually I admire your ideas to combine Two Forms. Have Great Days.
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