Unwritten

Thoughts whirl and twirl in my mind,
as I remain transfixed on the blank page.
I can't make sense of the dialogue.
It’s all jumbled up~ confusion overload,
I can’t decipher  words and thoughts.
Until I decode them they’ll remain without
form in my subconscious unwritten.













04/16/2023
Contest: U Challenge Words
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Nancy Kaufman

Date: 4/22/2023 5:19:00 AM

Congratulations Alexis on your U challenge.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/20/2023 1:23:00 AM

Lovely. Congrats and God bless you. Love, Gina

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/19/2023 9:18:00 PM

Those unwritten thoughts sure produced a fine poem, Alexis, something which we all can relate to:) congratulations:)

Valsa George

Date: 4/19/2023 8:46:00 PM

As writers, we all experience this dilemma. Sometimes like a seed lying buried in the soil for a long time , sprouting after a rain, your unwritten poem may resurrect. Congratulations on your great win, dear Alexis.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/19/2023 4:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Alexis. Your apt depiction of writer's block, makes fine reading. Blessings

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/19/2023 3:32:00 PM

Congratulations on your WIN , great poem , you make it look so easy , gifted in writing: )

Ann Peck

Date: 4/19/2023 12:59:00 PM

Your poem is wonderful, Alexis! It describes what we go through staring at a blank page. :) Congratulations!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/19/2023 12:41:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs

David Kavanagh

Date: 4/19/2023 10:51:00 AM

Indeed Alexis sometimes our neurons get all tangled up and we cannot get a direct line to the source, congratulations on your placement in the contest, well deserved cheers David

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/19/2023 10:14:00 AM

In fact, I read your poem in the morning. I wanted to write a comment. I could not do so, as I became a bit busy soon. Coming back - I like your poems very much. This is one of them too. Short and sweet. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 4/19/2023 6:49:00 AM

Alexis, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations ! Very nice !

Alexis Y.
Date: 4/19/2023 8:17:00 AM

Hi Constance, I enjoy your contests. I appreciate my placement in your contest. Have a great day:-)Alexis

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/18/2023 7:54:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Alex.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/18/2023 7:26:00 PM

Interesting write Alexis. I'm sure they will take form and become one of your lovely poems! Congratulations your win! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/18/2023 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely write and ending. Have a blessed day.................

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/18/2023 2:24:00 PM

Great one. Congratulations for your win :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/18/2023 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your contest win, Alexis. I liked the flow and rhythm, as well as your wonderful imagery.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2023 1:04:00 PM

oh yes, you must write and make them come together. Well said.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/16/2023 4:28:00 PM

Happens, sometimes the poem won’t come together!

Sand Blown

Date: 4/16/2023 4:18:00 PM

write on.....yes the unwrit 'ten' words they-sore-us......however the-'soar'-est of books be a thesaurus.....love that book... ...stan

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/16/2023 3:13:00 PM

Until I decode them they’ll remain without form in my subconscious unwritten---we have those thoughts from time to time. Well done to address your theme, Alexis.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/16/2023 1:11:00 PM

Sometimes it’s not easy to unravel our thoughts and to get our ideas written down, it’s alike an unfinished jigsaw puzzle when the missing pieces can’t be found. An enjoyable read Alexis, all the best ~ Belle :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/16/2023 12:15:00 PM

- I often get stuck on the blank page... great written, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs