Untethered

Untethered to this earth, I am a bird.
I’m winging and I’m singing in the sky.
How glorious this feels, but I’m not heard!
I wish for all to know my joy. I fly
back to the nest upon the blossomed tree,
where blissfully I let my voice resound.
There are so many things that I could be!
By merely thinking it, I now am found
in water, and a dolphin I’ve become!
With glee, I’m moving free. Bright flashes are
sea creatures drifting past me. I succumb
to pure enchantment. Then I see a star!
Out from the sea in my OWN skin I lift
as up… up…. toward night’s first bright star I drift.

Feb. 23, 2021 -
 NA for Imagine A Freedom Beyond Imagination Contest Judged 2/25/21
For the Na Poem From A February 2021 Judged Contest - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Date: 3/19/2021 10:59:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my NA Poem From a Contest Judged in Feb 2021. I love this poem, well done _Constance
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Date: 3/18/2021 2:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrea! you sound so free ad liberated!!
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Date: 3/18/2021 12:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win . Hugs
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Date: 3/18/2021 10:28:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your first place win! Your words soar like a bird and flow like water over a dolphin in this lovely sonnet. All the best my friend!
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Date: 3/1/2021 12:18:00 PM
Freedom in flight - nicely done! Linda
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Date: 2/28/2021 8:19:00 AM
Nice one Andrea first a bird, then a dolphin and finally a star . imagine if we could really do all this. Awesome sonnet. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/26/2021 7:09:00 PM
Hello Andrea … another very impressive sonnet written by you Andrea. You do truly have the ability for sonnet writing - thank you Andrea - Lindsay
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Date: 2/24/2021 4:54:00 PM
WoW! Andrea, Good entry for contest. It gives off a “ freedom” vibe and feeling. Your imagination soared in this write. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/24/2021 1:49:00 PM
Love the surreal quality of your sonnet, Andrea! I dream I can fly, but not with wings, and I'm more often a fish in my dreams than a person :) Love the ending, dear. Best wishes in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 2/24/2021 11:15:00 AM
Andrea, I do get a feeling of freedom. Very nice.
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Date: 2/24/2021 3:33:00 AM
Definitely a freedom beyond imagination Andrea, well written. Tom
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Date: 2/23/2021 10:47:00 PM
You have imagine enough to change from a bird, to a dolphin, to a star. Next is the universe :) ~~
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Date: 2/23/2021 4:21:00 PM
Looks like a strong contender for the contest.
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