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Untamable Clemency, Collaboration With Ink Empress

A collaboration with Ink Empress, a piece we wrote for “Woman’s Day” for all the strong women warriors out there. Your strength is felt. “Untamable Clemency” Her heart is a chained haven, for zestless intruders and fiendish foes, so tread delicately, she is not a mindless marionette in your glistening gallery of greed— glazed in rhinestone rhapsodies, she is more than cold-boned ideologies, placed by timeless seasons, she soars above restrained reveries, as an untamable heat of clemency. Ink Empress Fading Star Silence

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/23/2023 5:09:00 PM

Wow, you did one together. It's beautiful.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 10:48:00 AM

Thank you so much, lovely soul! We appreciate your kind words!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/19/2023 3:47:00 AM

A lovely write! Congratulations on POTD!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet soul!! We appreciate your thoughts on our collab! :)

Billie Jama

Date: 10/17/2023 7:47:00 AM

This short poem packed a powerful punch, do so with wonderful alliteration and incredibly imagery. This is a well deserved POTD. Congratulations to you both

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 11:26:00 AM

Aww! Thank you so much for your lovely words and lovely wishes! We are so grateful, Billie!

John Hamilton

Date: 10/15/2023 1:34:00 PM

So many wonderful phrases but I especially liked your alliteration, it adds to the potency and impact of the write. Worthy winner of potd!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your love feedback and wishes! We appreciate you, kind soul!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/24/2023 11:27:00 AM

Thank you so much for your love feedback and wishes! We appreciate you, kind soul!

Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 10/14/2023 11:12:00 PM

Empress Ink Fading Star Silence... superb to read this poem; congrats for selecting the poem as POD

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 12:38:00 AM

Thank you so much for your lovely well wishes, kind soul! We appreciate you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/14/2023 10:16:00 PM

I saw a series once called Haven, the protagonist a woman who saves her town from several disasters. Great collaboration with plenty of alliteration. Blessings.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/15/2023 12:39:00 AM

I must look into that series! It sounds like a deep and empowering read! Thank you so kindly for your amazing feedback! We are truly grateful!

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2023 5:44:00 AM

A brilliant ode for women..Power to you all..Congratulations on your POTD

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for your kindness, silent one! And for your advocacy for us women! You’re a lovely soul!

Sam Scott

Date: 10/13/2023 9:38:00 PM

This is wonderful. For all the strong women I know and love and especially those who harbour kindness and compassion and share it generously. Never to be underestimated as a powerful force for good in this sometimes harsh reality. Brilliant POTD! Congrats. :))

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for your wishes and for your amazing comment!! We are truly so grateful!

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/13/2023 7:33:00 PM

You're exactly right, she's not a "mindless marionette." Simply allowing others to take advantage of her. She does have a voice. Yes, her strength comes from within, and it shines outwardly. Congratulations Fading Star Silence and Ink Empress, on Poem of the Day. Hugs, Brandy

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:27:00 PM

Absolutely!! Hehe, thank you so much for your amazingly empowering and beautiful comment! We celebrate your strength and beauty! Thank you so much for your beautiful thoughts on our collab!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/13/2023 5:29:00 PM

What a magnificent poem! It is exquisitely crafted and a true masterpiece of collaboration. I extend my hearty congratulations to Empress Ink and Fading Star Silence for their well-deserved recognition as recipients of the prestigious Poem of the Day award. This remarkable piece resonates deeply with the essence of womanhood, capturing the complexity and strength of all women on this special occasion of Women's Day.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment! It was such an honor to collab with empress ink on this empowering piece for women’s day! We are truly grateful for your thoughts, lovely soul! Thank you!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/13/2023 2:50:00 PM

Congratulations Empress Ink and Fading Star Silence on receiving the award for poem of the day. A wonderful write for all women on ‘Woman’s Day… Belle

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:28:00 PM

Thank you so kindly, lovely belle for your uplifting comment on our collab! We are truly grateful!

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 10/13/2023 2:06:00 PM

A hearty congratulations on this POTD collaboration, so lovely and beautifully worded.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:28:00 PM

Aww! Thank you so much for your beautiful comment and well wishes! You are appreciated, kind soul!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/13/2023 1:32:00 PM

Warmest congratulations on POTD to Empress Ink and Fading Star Silence, for this beautiful, inspiring poem. :)

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:29:00 PM

Thank you so so much for your lovely feedback, sweet soul! We are truly grateful for your lovely heart!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/13/2023 1:26:00 PM

Congratulations to both of you, Empress Ink, and Fading Star Silence!What a great collaboration! Awesome! Love and Hugs ~

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for your beautiful comment! We truly appreciate you and so grateful for your well wishes, lovely soul!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/13/2023 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Fading Star Silence and Ink, what a great write. Have a blessed day/weekend with your wonderful win...................

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:30:00 PM

Thank you so much for your lovely well wishes! We truly appreciate you!

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/13/2023 1:14:00 PM

Congratulations

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:30:00 PM

I love you micio

Nik Canada7

Date: 10/13/2023 1:13:00 PM

I'm proud and happy for you amore?@fadingstarsilence your deep soulful words showing me your depth in your rare beautiful soul and gold heart,my blue rose. The grace and pureness in the way you paint your deepest thoughts with the palette of your aura in a masterpiece of colors and shades of intense sapphire emotions,my korean princess. You are the poetry in my heart for eternity,my marvelous creature. Mia bellissima moglie ti amo infinito per sempre amore mio ???i love you deepmy micia

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:32:00 PM

Your words fill me with so much love and beauty and your support for all, brings such a beautiful light to my life..I love you to the moon and everywhere amore mio mio bellissimo martio..per sempre..tua noi infintio il nostro Eterno amore Mia passione

I Am Anaya

Date: 10/13/2023 10:19:00 AM

Thank you for acknowledging Woman's Day [keep womans rights alive] with a powerful collaboration of the soulless who use their platform to taunt, mundane reality isn't it? Congratulations on your POTD Fading Star and welcome! Warm wishes ~I Am Anaya

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:33:00 PM

You are truly an exceptional woman! Thank YOU for your beautiful thoughts and well wishes and warm welcome, lovely I Am Anaya!! We truly appreciate you, and your amazing strength and beauty!

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/13/2023 9:56:00 AM

Exceptional poetry! Superb lines like "glistening gallery of greed," enhanced by effective alliteration. The opening metaphor certainly pulls in readers with its powerful comparison. Quite a remarkable portrait of a stalwart women. Congratulations! Brian

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:34:00 PM

Thank you so much, Brian! For your amazing feedback! And your lovely well wishes! Your thoughts truly run deep and we appreciate you!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/13/2023 9:33:00 AM

Powerful images - "mindless marionette," "restrained reveries," "cold-boned ideologies" just to name a few! The alliterations add to the power of the poem. Reminds me, in ways, of the song "I am woman, hear me roar!" Congratulations on your POTD collaboration! Blessings!

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:35:00 PM

Hehe, thank you so much for your amazing feedback and thoughts! Yes, I’m now thinking and have this song on loop in my mind now “I am woman, hear me roar” haha! Thank you so much on your lovely well wishes! We appreciate you!!

Ken Rone

Date: 10/13/2023 9:07:00 AM

Ahhh....strong delvery! ..."glistening gallery of greed glazed in rhinestone rhapsodies..." congratulations on a timely POTD. Best - Ken

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:36:00 PM

Ahh, thank you so much! Your feedback truly is so appreciated! We are so grateful for your thoughts and well wishes for our collab! We appreciate you!

Bill Baker

Date: 10/13/2023 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations to you both, a fine tribute the strong women. Another congratulation for being published in Womens Day! Enjoy your day of recognition, you deserve it. A belated welcome to Poetry Soup, Fading Star Silence. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:37:00 PM

Thank you so much, bill! Truly grateful for your feedback and thoughts on our collab and we appreciate you!

Constance La France

Date: 10/13/2023 8:23:00 AM

Ink and Fading, you both wrote a beautiful poem and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor.

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:37:00 PM

Thank you so dearly, lovely Constance! We appreciate your well wishes and your thoughts on our collab!

Mona Ebel

Date: 10/13/2023 7:58:00 AM

I would love to write poetry like that. That is a brilliant piece in my eyes

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:38:00 PM

I’m sure you could and do!! Thank you so much for your beautiful thoughts on our collab! We appreciate you!! Can’t wait to read your poetry as well! :)

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/13/2023 7:27:00 AM

A winsome twosome for sure. Congratulations to both! :)

Fading Star Silence
Date: 10/14/2023 5:39:00 PM

Thank you so so much lovely Linda! We appreciate you and thank you for your lovely well wishes!