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The rhyme scheme of this Hybronnet is aabb cccc ddee ff

For the H Form - Hybronnet Poetry Contest of Constance La France

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"Dear brown-eyed boy, I never can forget your loving ways. The memory of you forever stays." quote by poem's author Your lips I kiss. Then like a butterfly, my heart sprouts wings and dances in the sky. A precious bloom, my dear, you are to me, and I’m your reverencing honey bee. You hold me close, and in your warm embrace I wish to stay; you gaze upon my face and with soft fingers, tenderly you trace my features. I’m in such a blissful place! Your eyes are chocolate. They mirror mine with sweet devotion, and I’m on Cloud Nine. I revel in the moments (as do you) when we can meet. They always feel brand new! Oh, what I’d give to make each moment last. Your ways of loving me are unsurpassed.

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:56:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my Hybronnet contest, beautifully penned, I love the quote, Constance
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Date: 9/21/2024 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning work. I am delighted to see it on the winners' list. Way to go. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Sara K
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Date: 9/16/2024 8:48:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful young love write again. Have a blessed day with your win..................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2024 10:59:00 PM
Thanks, Paula
Date: 9/16/2024 8:01:00 AM
Sounds like to me a "great" grandchild might be the subject of your piece. Not a romantic kind of love but love in its purest form. "A precious bloom" hints of someone much younger than a peer. The soft fingers of my grandchild seeks to remove my glasses (as a new toy) but he is learning slowly what "no" means. A precious piece, Andrea, well-deserving the placement.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2024 10:59:00 PM
Thanks. But it was romantic love after all
Date: 9/16/2024 6:11:00 AM
The innocence and vibrance of first love perhaps? Exquisitely penned, Andrea, enjoyed every line! Congratulations on your inevitable top win
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/16/2024 11:00:00 PM
Yes. Thanks, S.O.
Date: 9/7/2024 12:29:00 PM
Oh no mush mush mush..' Andrea.' I declare?? Yet no..I suppose its strong point of women? Do I know that much?? Its all very mushy thats Iabout it..' And theres much worse to write on.' Oh alright.! lots of kisses (if you can't beat em?) At lesst acknowledge them...Gotcha..!!
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Joe Maverick
Date: 9/8/2024 2:45:00 PM
Well thats the most un-romantic re buff ever..' you Are a challenge.' But next time Don't leave yoyr pen near the Potato mash.' It will save me Making up silly comments for One..' No no not you as one.' Nor I either..Its wether or never I'll ever.??? Ih what rhymes ok?? Send trevor.. The end!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 1:15:00 PM
It's just the way my pen wanders
Date: 9/7/2024 7:37:00 AM
Sweet. I loved your rhyme. This is the first time I've seen this form.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:16:00 AM
I made up the rhyme scheme for hybronnet contest
Date: 9/6/2024 12:30:00 PM
A beautiful hybronnet... rhyme flow was done well <3
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:16:00 AM
Thanks, Paige
Date: 9/6/2024 11:45:00 AM
What a wonderful young love write. Great quote/ending... Oh young love, how great it was. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away............
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:17:00 AM
Yes. I miss the days of young love.
Date: 9/5/2024 9:07:00 PM
This is so very lovely and deeply romantic. The image of the bloom and the honey bee, I love a lot. All the Best Andrea....
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:17:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa
Date: 9/5/2024 1:26:00 PM
Very creative in your rhymes, but you do sonnets in your sleep and eat rhymes for breakfast.. I hope you had a lovely birthday..
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:18:00 AM
Ha. Thanks , S O.
Date: 9/5/2024 1:22:00 PM
Very romantic -- tenderly expressed. Does he have a sister?
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:18:00 AM
I could make one up for this amazing character!
Date: 9/5/2024 11:08:00 AM
This is so beautiful and heartfelt sweet andrea! Absolutely love the theme youv gone for and how you’ve written such a descriptive poem of love and longing! I wasnt sure of a rhyme scheme … so still haven’t written for this contest! But i think yours will score high! Love the quote too. Best wishes always
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:20:00 AM
Ink, you came up with a great rhyme scheme yourself. I just always seem to end up writing on lost love. I wonder what that says about me.
Date: 9/5/2024 7:55:00 AM
A very romantic verse Andrea, best of luck in the contest. Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, Tom
Date: 9/5/2024 5:24:00 AM
Dear Andrea, What a wonderful love poem to read this morning. I have brown eyes and my wife blue and all three of my daughters have blue eyes. I would always tell them that I love my brown eyed girls and they would smile and say, Dad, they are blue. Now I have 3 granddaughters and their eyes are brown. Now I can truly say that I love my brown eyed babies. Thanks for your wonderful ink! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:24:00 AM
Thanks, and yes. Isn't it a wonder about genetics and the way it works. My mom has hazel eyes and my dad had blue. But all four of their daughters ended up with nondescript eye color like a mix of green, blue and grey. I really can't think of name for our eye color but I put green on my driver's license. My son got that color too but my daughter got true blue. I see others with my eye color but I don't think there is a name for it.
Date: 9/4/2024 8:39:00 PM
A lovely puppy-love write!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, Kim.
Date: 9/4/2024 7:06:00 PM
A kiss that gives you bliss, Very nicely penned Andrea
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Date: 9/4/2024 12:55:00 PM
Dishing out sweet image of reciprocity, aww. There is a tap left open and it flow in such a lovely way undulating in rhythmic methophor. "Reverencing honey bee... timing stopping.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/7/2024 10:25:00 AM
Thanks, Weston

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