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Unshackle My Verse

Perhaps I’ll write some more The judge he threw the book at me for something I did write I do not know what that could be, I drank a bit last night I know I had a pen in hand and my heart she did break He hollered, “Spit it out young man, it’s too much time you take” Some verses, yes I now recall about the one I love He said it was against the law, that I was not above “It states right here in black and white, no stanzas that might rhyme” He put the page within my sight, it seems it is a crime He slammed his gavel to the wood, then shouted, “thirty days” Said I should think about it good and change my lawless ways Oh yes your honor, that I’ll do, I’ll walk a lawful track My fingers that he couldn’t view, were crossed behind my back The judge he threw the book at me, I’ve got it now for sure I think the book was poetry, perhaps I’ll write some more 3/24/17 Written for the UNSHACKLE MY VERSE poetry contest Sponsored by: Kim Rodrigues

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Date: 5/6/2017 12:03:00 AM
congratulations on your win!good one.have a great day!
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Chris Green
Date: 5/8/2017 8:48:00 AM
Thank you so very much Kenisha.
Date: 4/22/2017 9:54:00 PM
love it deserves to win
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 9:09:00 AM
Thank you so very much km.
Date: 4/22/2017 7:03:00 PM
I love the dialogue. Beautiful poem. Congrats!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thank you so very much Elle. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 4/22/2017 9:52:00 AM
Hi Chris, When I first saw this well written write I knew it was a winner. A write of this standard , I'm surprised I'm on the list . Congratulations on your top win. It was most definitely well deserved: -) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 9:08:00 AM
Thanks so very much my friend. I appreciate you Alexis and your friendship is worth more than winning any contest.
Date: 4/21/2017 9:15:00 PM
Back to congratulate you.. awesome win :)
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so very much Eve.
Date: 4/21/2017 6:33:00 PM
See, there is justice in the world! I knew I was reading a winner the first time! Congrats young man, (it really deserves a trophy this one).
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Chris Green
Date: 4/24/2017 9:07:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. Trophy, nah, friends like you are all the trophies I need.
Date: 4/21/2017 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations and salutations, Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 4:53:00 PM
Thanks so very much John.
Date: 4/21/2017 4:32:00 PM
Congratulations Chris on your well deserved win, absolutely brilliant. :))
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 4:35:00 PM
Thanks so much Roy. I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 4/21/2017 3:48:00 PM
I like the ending..Congrats on your win
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 4:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Joseph.
Date: 4/21/2017 11:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 11:58:00 AM
Thanks so much.
Date: 4/21/2017 10:46:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Chris. I really enjoyed your poem, and that he threw a poetry book at you was the icing on the cake, so to speak.
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 11:02:00 AM
Thanks so very much Agnes. Could you do me a big favor and bake a file into that cake? I need to get out of this place. :)
Date: 4/21/2017 10:27:00 AM
I always love seeing who won my contest! Pleasure seeing you at the top! I love the drunken blur and the throwing of the poetry book! Congrats, Chris!
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Chris Green
Date: 4/21/2017 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim. I am so thrilled you enjoyed this. To place at the top in your contest is an absolute honor for me. Thank you again.
Date: 3/27/2017 10:41:00 AM
Haha good one ,. A lot of our poetry need to get the gavel
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Chris Green
Date: 3/27/2017 10:50:00 AM
Thanks so much Eve. I believe you are right. : )
Date: 3/26/2017 8:44:00 AM
Fun write, Chris, I agree with WW:) a 7:)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/27/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thanks again Jo. I am happy you liked my fun little poem. I so appreciate your visits my good friend.
Date: 3/25/2017 1:43:00 AM
SO good, Chris! If this doesn't win, then there is no justice at all I say!
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Chris Green
Date: 3/27/2017 8:19:00 AM
No justice...I like that. :) Thanks so much my friend.
Date: 3/24/2017 4:40:00 PM
WoW! Chris, I really enjoyed this fun write. You are so good. I think you can write anything! It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thank you so very much Alexis. Your kindness is always my smile. :)
Date: 3/24/2017 3:20:00 PM
Chris, this is great, not only well rhymed but full of humor. I like it a lot, well done~
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 3/24/2017 2:44:00 PM
Wow! Love the tongue-in-cheek humor in your poem, Chris. (I probably would have thrown "the book" back at the judge.) Enjoyed this very much! Wishing you success in Kim's contest.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thanks so very much Carolyn for your kind thoughts. I am happy this one made you smile.
Date: 3/24/2017 1:45:00 PM
You are very funny and naughty you..fingers- crossing in the back.You reminded me of when I was a kid..and broke something in the house.Those crossed-fingers in the back never worked with mama :)Am smiling.
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:15:00 PM
Thanks so very much Charmaine. I am happy you liked my fun/naughty little poem
Date: 3/24/2017 1:18:00 PM
ha ha ha great humour Chris - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan. Glad it made you laugh. :)
Date: 3/24/2017 1:17:00 PM
Excellent Chris! Good luck in the contest. This should do well :)
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Chris Green
Date: 3/24/2017 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi.

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