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Letters or Photographs Contest b Ink Empress  9~20~24

I'm remembering our tender moments; how sweet was love that filled pages of poetry you will never read, where I wrote of my affection and things I no longer have the chance to say. Words of passion, anger, and dreams that were swept away. Melodies of memories I hold, still flow within my broken heart. I try to console myself with writing you since we've drifted apart, by recalling your voice as it gently whispered close to my ear. Utterances that I'll not ever forget because I hold them dear. Had I only imagined or fantasized that you loved me, too? No, I knew your heart loved mine before we both vowed, "I do." I remember the day you took my hand and knelt upon one knee. "Yes!" I cried, and I saw the desire in your eyes for want of me. I cannot chase those reveries away. Ones of your lilting laughter, thinking we'd share that tethered treasure of love forever after. Love; the greatest of all glorious gifts to each other we could offer, more priceless than precious gems or coins that would fill a coffer. You once asked me to write a pensive poem about a fallen star ~ A foreshadowing as I think back now, pondering where you are. I wonder if you still think of me with the same thoughts I remember or have you forgotten me as if there's not a spark left in that ember? Once it burned brightly. I don't want to believe that could be true for my heart still beats with longing and the yearning want of you. I will close this letter in these wistful words, "With love, always." Perhaps not the sentiment that I should fondly offer you these days. Forgive the stains that have blotched the ink. They're from my tears. I haven't managed to staunch their flow, even after all these years. I addressed the envelope to our home, but it matters not one whit that neither of us still live there. I know it's time that I get over it but this letter will join the others I keep hidden inside a desk drawer. Bound with crimson ribbon, written for a love I can no longer implore.

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Date: 10/8/2024 7:24:00 AM
Oh dear Lin, this is an impeccably profound piece that really stirred my soul with so many vulnerable sentiments. When a love, that was inseparable... becomes a forbidden melody which the heart still wishes to dream upon... all those tears and unsaid words, shed into words that will always remain a part of our essence. I could feel those fragile feelings in your pristinely crafted lines, flowing with beautiful diction. An amazing take on the contest! Heartiest congratulations on your win! Sending best wishes, always.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/10/2024 6:14:00 AM
Thank you very much for your congratulations as well as you encouraging comments on my poem, Sharma. They are fragile feelings, and I'm elated that you appreciated them.
Date: 10/5/2024 1:37:00 PM
Dear Lin, this is so touching and soul wrenching! When i first read this, I literally cried, because it resonated with me then, and still, it hits home and i feel so much reading this, every word woven in this is deeply moving and poignant! I especially love the lines “ You once asked me to write a pensive poem about a fallen star ~ I wonder if you still think of me with the same thoughts I remember or have you forgotten me as if there's not a spark left in that ember?“ poems with questions really stand out for me always as they connect with readers on a soulful level! This is an impeccable and so very sincere write with profound diction! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/6/2024 3:09:00 AM
Dear Ink, your lovely comments are always a welcomed sight on my poetry. I appreciate each word as a great compliment, and I sincerely thank you for finding a place on your winning list for my poem. The lines you chose as your faves were actually spoken to me. One last note... I am saddened to know that you related to the experience in this one, but we both survived the sorrow. ;-)
Date: 9/20/2024 10:29:00 PM
Quite a sad verse Lin, remembering happy times is heartbreaking when you remember the flames of passion that once were. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 9/20/2024 11:45:00 PM
There’s an emptiness that cannot be filled by anything. Thank you, Tom.
Date: 9/20/2024 9:48:00 PM
Wow Lin this is amazing and passionate! I love the flow and the way you put it together!
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Date: 9/20/2024 11:44:00 PM
Thank you for your thoughtful remarks, Karen.
Date: 9/20/2024 1:34:00 PM
A very unique take on the topic Lin. Very nicely done.
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Date: 9/20/2024 2:00:00 PM
Thanks a lot, John. It was a reality to me for some time, though not in letters but poetry. Some were posted here. Time to get over it took a few years.

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