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Bitter Ugly

words of anger and bitterness fester yet do not surface emotions boiling over through it all she maintains her poker face in the stench of his glare and ugliness of his heart the abuse and violation it’s all too much to bear it’s all he spews his days are numbered the reign of transgression soon to crumble she dreams she prays AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted for contest UNSAYABLE sponsored by NETTE ONCLAUD - November 23, 2017

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Date: 11/26/2017 11:43:00 PM
Powerful in every way. Simply love it.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/27/2017 4:44:00 AM
Thanks, Afzal. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2017 6:23:00 PM
A very powerful piece. Tell the world to stand up tall! We need to stop the cycle ourselves
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Date: 11/25/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, James. Very appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2017 6:19:00 PM
Like this. The stench of your glare is poignant and powerful
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2017 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Christopher. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/25/2017 1:20:00 PM
Hurrah a strong woman saying the things that need to be heard. Well done.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2017 6:43:00 PM
Unfortunately far too many bullies in the world. Thanks for your visit, Patricia.
Date: 11/25/2017 8:55:00 AM
Hello Line, Thanks for your recent comment on my latest sonnet. This is a very powerful write, with a demonstrable message. Abuse under any form or in any way is totally unacceptable!! Best of Luck in the Contest!! Cheers, Gary
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2017 12:36:00 PM
Thanks for your visit, Gary.
Date: 11/25/2017 7:30:00 AM
Powerful and emotive stuff, Line. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/25/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/24/2017 9:47:00 AM
The under current of life on earth is meant to never be given birth. We're called to rise above the frey. To let our kindness lead the way. Let us pray. Peace. :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/24/2017 8:18:00 PM
I love your comeback, Robert.
Date: 11/23/2017 2:31:00 PM
Very powerful write. Abuse should not be tolerated. Good luck in the contest.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2017 6:48:00 PM
Thank you for leaving a comment, Eileen.
Date: 11/23/2017 8:33:00 AM
Wow! That was strong, Line:)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/23/2017 11:40:00 AM
Thank, Jo. Sometimes you've just gotta let that steam out!

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