Bitter Ugly

words of anger and bitterness
fester yet do not surface
emotions boiling over
through it all
she maintains her poker face
in the stench of his glare
and ugliness of his heart

the abuse and violation 
it’s all too much to bear
it’s all he spews
his days are numbered
the reign of transgression
soon to crumble
she dreams she prays



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
November 26, 2017 at 11:43 PM
Powerful in every way. Simply love it.
Gauthier Avatar
November 27, 2017 at 4:44 AM
Thanks, Afzal. Most appreciated.
Swartz Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:23 PM
A very powerful piece. Tell the world to stand up tall! We need to stop the cycle ourselves
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, James. Very appreciated.
Flaherty Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:19 PM
Like this. The stench of your glare is poignant and powerful
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Thank you, Christopher. Much appreciated.
Cresswell Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 1:20 PM
Hurrah a strong woman saying the things that need to be heard. Well done.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 6:43 PM
Unfortunately far too many bullies in the world. Thanks for your visit, Patricia.
Bateman Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Hello Line, Thanks for your recent comment on my latest sonnet. This is a very powerful write, with a demonstrable message. Abuse under any form or in any way is totally unacceptable!! Best of Luck in the Contest!! Cheers, Gary
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 12:36 PM
Thanks for your visit, Gary.
Michaels Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Powerful and emotive stuff, Line. Best of luck in the contest. Regards, John.
Gauthier Avatar
November 25, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Thanks, John. Much appreciated.
Johnson Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 9:47 AM
The under current of life on earth is meant to never be given birth. We're called to rise above the frey. To let our kindness lead the way. Let us pray. Peace. :)
Gauthier Avatar
November 24, 2017 at 8:18 PM
I love your comeback, Robert.
Manassian Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Very powerful write. Abuse should not be tolerated. Good luck in the contest.
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 6:48 PM
Thank you for leaving a comment, Eileen.
Daniel Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 8:33 AM
Wow! That was strong, Line:)
Gauthier Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thank, Jo. Sometimes you've just gotta let that steam out!
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