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Unrequited Love - Parise Pariku

light crackles through the dark clouds compassion fills creator energy gives birth to mate – Frankenstein’s adoration not returned *"Parise Pariku" for Rick’s contest.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2011 11:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Carolyn in Rick's "Pariku Contest". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/7/2011 4:24:00 AM

Congrats Carolyn on your well deserved win in Rick's contest.

John Freeman

Date: 1/7/2011 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations friend, unique job, on your awesome poem's, and it's honorable place.

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/6/2011 8:59:00 PM

Very creative, unique take on the contest, Carolyn. Congratulations on your big win in the contest! Love, Audrey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/6/2011 8:50:00 PM

originality takes over.. congrats carolyn..:)nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/6/2011 7:57:00 PM

wow Carolyn.Many congratulations for this super success.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/6/2011 4:48:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/6/2011 4:00:00 PM

I love the unusual twist to the contest, Carolyn!! Makes me smile!! congratulations!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Rick, Carolyn

Rick Parise

Date: 1/6/2011 2:02:00 PM

Great example of energy//and just possibily a taste of the ungrateful seed. ENJOYED~Congrats on your 10th place VICTORY!!!!!!!!!!!!God bless~Rick

Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2011 1:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest, that last line make me smile ~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/6/2011 1:41:00 PM

ah, that poor Frankenstien! I enjoyed how you made a great ending line to go with your poem. Congratuations, Carolyn. LUv, Andrea

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/22/2010 5:25:00 PM

such imagery Carolyn, it reminds me of a Beauty and the beast situation. Harry

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/21/2010 1:34:00 PM

Yes, unrequited love is the perfect title for your very impressive entry, Carolyn! Beautiful imagery..I always marvel at the beauty of lightning. Aamazing! Thanks for your encouragement, Seafaress, always! Love, peace, joy, happiness and blessings always, Audrey

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/21/2010 1:23:00 PM

mystifyingly original, carolyn.. " ligh crackles" draw immediate attention to this piece... best winning wishes to you, special one!! hugggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 12/21/2010 12:09:00 PM

This is quite the unique one, my dear! smile Agape, Moses

John Rhinem

Date: 12/21/2010 9:02:00 AM

Smile ~ But a snapshots moment so, "Smile &, 'Say Cheese!?'" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love, 'Forever,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'My Dear, Precious & Lovely Carolyn Devonshire,' Amid The Penetrating Lightnings Strikings of, 'Eternally, Beautiful Love;' Happy Holidays;" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 12/21/2010 8:56:00 AM

Smile ~ I love the parallelisms somewhat seemingful twist upon the closure's verse amid this reflective bearing painting "My 'Dear, Precious & Priceless Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ "Yes," it does seem sooo very often that the Created somehow, fail to see & or embrace the Creators true Love for they themselves; perhaps, because of All of the distracting elements amid the newness' I would believe, Shock of it all....It is amazing my dear, how, much can be found within ~ ....Cont:)

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 12/20/2010 9:36:00 AM

Your work is Outstanding,how are you dear?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2010 4:21:00 PM

Good luck in the contest...I don't think that I have looked at the contest so I don't know what it is about..I am sure that it will be in the winners' cirlce though..Your presence at my work about "Dad The Last Snowflake" was very uplifting..I appreciate you stopping by..Sara

John Loving Iii

Date: 12/19/2010 1:25:00 PM

and i was on his side. at mommas exchanging gifts and thought of you. merry christmas. love john

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/19/2010 7:49:00 AM

Very interesting take on Rick's pariku! Very unique, I think Rick will like this one! hugs- nikko :)

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/19/2010 7:33:00 AM

Excellent imagery and outstandingly composed words. This is superb my friend from your beautiful seasoned pen. My sincere good wishes for your entry in the contest, which should be on the top without doubt. Many thank for your kind and precious comments on 'My Xmas Prayer' and for your good wishes. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra...Carolyn Devonshire.

Wilma Neels

Date: 12/19/2010 7:07:00 AM

Carolyn, you sure did a marvellous job with this challenge.. Wishing you all the best for the contest my friend.. Love and blessings Wilma

Liz Walsh

Date: 12/19/2010 5:44:00 AM

Wonderful piece, Carolyn! I hope you have a great Christmas! Liz