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Unlucky Or Cursed

A blessed appointment so crucial, but missed the date all things done so perfect but arrives at a closed gate ill beyond any medicine living like hell’s cousin always on the wrong side of a rare misfortune's rate.

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Ilene Bauer

Date: 2/25/2016 2:56:00 PM

too bad! hope there's a way to make up for it...

Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 6:59:00 AM

Yes, there is always a way when there is a will. Thank you so much ilene bauer

Kelly Deschler

Date: 2/25/2016 1:33:00 PM

Everyone goes through times like this in life, but eventually good things always find their way to us... I feel the powerful emotions coming through in this poem. Very well expressed, Funom!

Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 6:58:00 AM

Thank you a million fold Kelly. I really appreciate your comment

Warren Dickman

Date: 2/25/2016 12:43:00 PM

That's me all the way, Funom. I know when my ship comes in I'll probably be at the airport.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 6:58:00 AM

Hahahaha! Great to know warren. I hope your gate opens once again. I am glad someone is able to identify with this situation, even though I wrote it out of inspiration

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/25/2016 8:56:00 AM

Awwww....it's hard to be just within reach of a blessing. Powerful write....

Funom Makama
Date: 2/27/2016 6:55:00 AM

yes it is.. Thank you so much Eileen