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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid comes easy. Albert Einstein
How are the celestial bodies positioned in the sky? The universe's scientific brace requires a lyrical aspect Ponder around who evolved bearing them and why An articulate and eloquent artist with an odd effect Sporadically I'll watch them for a whole day straight Hoping for a wounded star to sweep away all the hate To ponder the grace of light fade, for a twist of fate And how will the day restore the sun at a future dawn? A steady current that we watched daily is simply gone We attend it daily, but few notice the tread on the lawn It's virtually human nature to shun beauty passing by We seldom view art with trepidation or mute respect Views that can be seen by the eyes of a wise state Knowing something larger is waiting to be drawn. Written: April 16, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - 'U' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Date: 5/1/2023 5:16:00 AM
Great imagery. The universe is a marvelous wonder. Captivating write.
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Date: 4/19/2023 9:09:00 AM
Wow! Lasaad, You did an outstanding with the chosen word. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day;-) Alexis
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Date: 4/19/2023 6:16:00 AM
Sotto, thank you so much for sharing your poem with us in my Writing Challenge congratulations. Excellent ! And I like the image and quote !
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:18:00 AM
A remarkable outcome for such a difficult form. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 4/19/2023 2:04:00 AM
Hearty congratulations dear Lasaad on your well deserved first place win. Love your entry.
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Date: 4/18/2023 8:42:00 PM
Very beautiful writing on the Universe, in the typical style of Constance. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/18/2023 7:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Contest....Sotto. Well arranged With good meaning in daily life.
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Date: 4/18/2023 6:46:00 PM
Love the way you have structured this Lasaad, and you words are poignant indeed. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/18/2023 4:50:00 PM
- Congratulations with this wonderful universe write, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 4/18/2023 3:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Dear Poet, on an excellent win. The theme being our mysterious universe, you have used a unique form with great ease. Win well-deserved!
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Date: 4/18/2023 2:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Love It.  Have a blessed day.................
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Date: 4/16/2023 9:51:00 AM
Universe is a great mystery. Many of the phenomena in nature are mysterious. We can only gaze at it in wonder and ponder over its creation. A great hand has forged it. With reverence, let us bow before that power. You have dealt with a lofty theme in a lofty manner. All the best dear friend.
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Date: 4/16/2023 5:43:00 AM
The universe is a mighty venture for the humans. Ponder around who evolved bearing them and why An articulate and eloquent artist with an odd effect--well said, Lasaad.
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