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Universal Truth

From cosmologies To cosmogonies Early quantitive Models by the Greeks Teach us, Universe ~~ The Big Bang, called Planck epoch, tells off a dense phase In cosmic grow ~~ We are now Here today Man alive ~~ Future Who knows? Be ~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations James on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:13:00 PM

Congratulations James on your poem's worthiness in the top ten placement. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2010 2:25:00 PM

yes BE! enjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love

De R

Date: 9/18/2010 10:00:00 AM

Congrats on your win :) Emilia

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:51:00 PM

Congratulations on this wonderful entry, James

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 9:03:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:47:00 AM

nice one James, love it , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on your win James in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 9:00:00 PM

congratulations James. Charles

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:20:00 PM

Congratulations on 10th place~~

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/16/2010 3:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, James! Thanks for the kind comments! Enjoy!! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:18:00 PM

Congrats James on your top ten winning poem in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy with luv..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:34:00 PM

Congrats James...Be~~~~ I love that...BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 1:42:00 PM

Mr H, congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest with this gem. I'm off to la la land after this comment. Enjoy the rest of your evening ;)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:48:00 PM

It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, James. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 9/13/2010 1:16:00 PM

Hey Bro! This is late, but thnx for the comments on my piece.. 'preciate it! Take care. ....Jimmy

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/9/2010 1:17:00 PM

Very cool -- thought provoking!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2010 12:09:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this interesting work that reads like winners' circle to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Have a great night..Sara

De R

Date: 9/9/2010 11:56:00 AM

Great entry for the contest...I never tried this form before...it looks interesting. Best wishes in the contest! Emilia

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/9/2010 8:20:00 AM

Indeed, who knows what the future will bring, James. We have to "be" in the moment and try to find as much happiness as possible. Very cool entry and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Simone Segal

Date: 9/9/2010 12:34:00 AM

Hello James! how's you? great poem, goood luck for contest, love Simone

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2010 9:04:00 PM

Wow Mr. Fraser, I just love your entry, different take on the contest as well.. Best wishes for Rick's contest! Guess what? Birds are chirping, my way of starting a day :) enjoy yours ~ Wilma

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/8/2010 7:26:00 PM

Just, "Be"...Excellent entry for Rick's "Universe" Contest....Peace,Audrey

Anthony Nutter

Date: 9/8/2010 6:36:00 PM

Future who knows, the cosmic question, such an intriguing write and as far as the future goes do we really want to know what is hidden around the corner? Not me. Enjoyed the read sir poet. A winner for sure,.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/8/2010 5:46:00 PM

A wonderful entry to the contest, on Greek mythology, James. Good luck