James Fraser Poet Diminished Hexaverse

Universal Truth

From cosmologies 
To cosmogonies 
Early quantitive
Models by the Greeks
  Teach us, Universe ~~

The Big Bang, called
Planck epoch, tells
off a dense phase
 In cosmic grow ~~

We are now
Here today
   Man alive ~~

Future
 Who knows?

   Be ~~~

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 25, 2010 at 10:06 AM Congratulations James on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 15, 2010 at 6:13 PM Congratulations James on your poem's worthiness in the top ten placement. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi September 18, 2010 at 2:25 PM yes BE! enjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love

De R September 18, 2010 at 10:00 AM Congrats on your win :) Emilia

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2010 at 12:51 PM Congratulations on this wonderful entry, James

Caryl Muzzey September 17, 2010 at 9:03 AM A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts September 17, 2010 at 7:47 AM nice one James, love it , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown September 17, 2010 at 6:45 AM Congratulations on your win James in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson September 16, 2010 at 9:00 PM congratulations James. Charles

Constance La France September 16, 2010 at 8:20 PM Congratulations on 10th place~~

Audrey Haick September 16, 2010 at 3:51 PM Congratulations on your fantastic win in the contest, James! Thanks for the kind comments! Enjoy!! Peace, Audrey

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 3:18 PM Congrats James on your top ten winning poem in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy with luv..

Barbara Gorelick September 16, 2010 at 2:34 PM Congrats James...Be~~~~ I love that...BG

Wilma Neels September 16, 2010 at 1:42 PM Mr H, congratulations on your placement in Rick's contest with this gem. I'm off to la la land after this comment. Enjoy the rest of your evening ;)

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2010 at 12:48 PM It's great to see your poem in the winners' circle, James. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Jimmy Anderson September 13, 2010 at 1:16 PM Hey Bro! This is late, but thnx for the comments on my piece.. 'preciate it! Take care. ....Jimmy

Diane Locksley September 9, 2010 at 1:17 PM Very cool -- thought provoking!

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2010 at 12:09 PM Good luck in the contest with this interesting work that reads like winners' circle to me..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Have a great night..Sara

De R September 9, 2010 at 11:56 AM Great entry for the contest...I never tried this form before...it looks interesting. Best wishes in the contest! Emilia

Carolyn Devonshire September 9, 2010 at 8:20 AM Indeed, who knows what the future will bring, James. We have to "be" in the moment and try to find as much happiness as possible. Very cool entry and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn

Simone Segal September 9, 2010 at 12:34 AM Hello James! how's you? great poem, goood luck for contest, love Simone

Wilma Neels September 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM Wow Mr. Fraser, I just love your entry, different take on the contest as well.. Best wishes for Rick's contest! Guess what? Birds are chirping, my way of starting a day :) enjoy yours ~ Wilma

Audrey Haick September 8, 2010 at 7:26 PM Just, "Be"...Excellent entry for Rick's "Universe" Contest....Peace,Audrey

Anthony Nutter September 8, 2010 at 6:36 PM Future who knows, the cosmic question, such an intriguing write and as far as the future goes do we really want to know what is hidden around the corner? Not me. Enjoyed the read sir poet. A winner for sure,.

Dr.Ram Mehta September 8, 2010 at 5:46 PM A wonderful entry to the contest, on Greek mythology, James. Good luck

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