Unicorn Eyes

How can you possess such unicorn eyes? How can you be both innocent and wise?

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Line Gauthier

Date: 6/9/2018 10:15:00 PM

Sweet. Congrats on your podium finish, Michelle.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/4/2018 11:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement.

Eve Roper

Date: 6/4/2018 10:54:00 PM

Great verse, Michelle, love the imagery you created ;congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/4/2018 8:03:00 AM

- Hurray :) - Many congrats on your win, Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Elaine George

Date: 6/4/2018 7:25:00 AM

A great two Liner, Elaine

Silent One

Date: 6/4/2018 6:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/18/2018 10:06:00 PM

#1: The 'me of me' theme reappears---but without any redundancy or staleness at all. I say this is an outstanding couplet. Splendid. Bravo! :) Gershon '#2 - I don't know anything about unicorns. Really. Always thought that was 'girls' stuff' growing up. So I can't comment intelligently or otherwise.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/19/2018 8:31:00 AM

Yes I thought about putting #1 with 'I Could' but left it as a stand-alone, glad you enjoyed it!

Arturo Michael

Date: 3/17/2018 6:57:00 AM

Both are lovely...All the best Michelle

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/18/2018 9:21:00 AM

So glad for your comments as always, Arturo.