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Unfulfilling Love

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Dormant desires within derelict deserts’ Winds whispering of your selective stealth Frozen fingers that chill the empty spaces Longing for you a pacifier of thickened thorns Discombobulation drives the day Your mendacious love marooned on dusty dunes Secluded silhouettes stranded Mystifying mirages migrating Only sacrificial shadows scream Where your love mutates into a holographic hollow Desolation within a Venus vacuum An anemic vampire Erotic deceptions dominate deflecting desires Eruptive emotions have no place to tread For your unfulfilling love, a puff of smoke In a hellion hole. Sept.10.2019 Sometimes love is not enough Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 2'nd & POTD...Thank You

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/11/2019 5:20:00 PM

In a hellion hole, indeed! Creative artistry spills with dark emotions of fraudulent love from your golden pen, my dear bro bro. A double belated congrats for your contest win and for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors. The Unicorns give you a standing ovation, as do I. Love and hugs, your sane sissy <3

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/18/2019 2:59:00 PM

Luscious descriptions. Congrats on your win and POTD.

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 3:05:00 PM

WW congratulations on your win.. nice music and reading

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/17/2019 7:32:00 AM

So well done. I also like the graphic. I see this is doubly special. Congrats on your win and POTD

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/14/2019 11:50:00 PM

Congratulations and prayers

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/14/2019 2:37:00 PM

- Congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/14/2019 12:09:00 PM

Great lines of alliteration as always.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/13/2019 12:44:00 AM

This poem ^WW^ is beyond congratulations, it is: supercalafragelisticexpialadocious - don't know if I got the phrase right, but I hope so. Your POTD is spectacular as always, intense and with dictionary by my side and buckets of concentration I understood it kudos my dear friend. Forgive me for my belated replies lately but moving home and working, packing and poetry has exhausted me, have divided into 3 pieces, it's not working! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Hello There

Date: 9/12/2019 6:08:00 PM

Congrats :)

Vladislav Raven

Date: 9/12/2019 6:05:00 PM

Dropping back with belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day Honour with this wonderful piece my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Winged Warrior

Date: 9/12/2019 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, everyone...for your lovely comments plus support...and for making this poem potd...your friendly neighborhood poet...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/12/2019 3:04:00 AM

Wow! WW, You met the contest challenge in spades. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. I wish I could of luck in the contest. Congratulations on the poem of the day. You deserved it. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/11/2019 5:27:00 PM

Empty Love. Love embracing the heart, only for show. Unfulfilling indeed. So sad. You have expressed this emotion very well my Warrior with Wings. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. May Love embrace You Completely. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2019 3:29:00 PM

Fantastic, ^W^, congratulations on POTD. Hugs

Chris Green

Date: 9/11/2019 11:34:00 AM

Hey there, look at that. The site sure does know good poetry when they see it. Congrats my friend on your honor here POTD. Well deserved.

John Hamilton

Date: 9/11/2019 10:35:00 AM

Back with congrats on POTD!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/11/2019 10:05:00 AM

Yikes! You nailed this theme. Great write! Congrats on POTD and good luck in the contest! xomo

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/11/2019 10:05:00 AM

Congratulations!

Bobby May

Date: 9/11/2019 9:35:00 AM

Congratulation WW on PTOD, I knew this was a winner my friend!!

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/11/2019 8:52:00 AM

'An anemic vampire' I like that one...even, 'Discombobulation drives the day' Congratulation WW on PTOD

Maria Williams

Date: 9/11/2019 7:21:00 AM

Creative and artistically depicted John. As always your golden pen flows imaginatively leaving your reader wanting more. Bravo and good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your well deserved POTD ....Maria Hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/11/2019 7:11:00 AM

Nice writing my friend. I am not surprised to see this as POTD but congratulations are in order :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/11/2019 7:08:00 AM

Ornamental words--congratulation WW, on poem of the day.

Joseph May

Date: 9/11/2019 6:58:00 AM

Very nicely penned WW...Congrats on POTD

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 9/11/2019 4:44:00 AM

Congratulations, Winged Warrior on your POTD honour! Your artistry and creative poetry deserve acknowledgement and recognition.. Warmest wishes and regards.. God bless you.