Winged Warrior Poet Free verse

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Unfulfilling Love

Dormant desires within derelict deserts’
Winds whispering of your selective stealth
Frozen fingers that chill the empty spaces
Longing for you a pacifier of thickened thorns
Discombobulation drives the day
Your mendacious love marooned on dusty dunes
Secluded silhouettes stranded
Mystifying mirages migrating
Only sacrificial shadows scream
Where your love mutates into a holographic hollow
Desolation within a Venus vacuum
An anemic vampire
Erotic deceptions dominate deflecting desires
Eruptive emotions have no place to tread
For your unfulfilling love, a puff of smoke
In a hellion hole.





Sept.10.2019
Sometimes love is not enough
Sponsored by: Silent One

Placed 2'nd & POTD...Thank You

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Susan Ashley October 11, 2019 at 5:20 PM In a hellion hole, indeed! Creative artistry spills with dark emotions of fraudulent love from your golden pen, my dear bro bro. A double belated congrats for your contest win and for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors. The Unicorns give you a standing ovation, as do I. Love and hugs, your sane sissy <3

Jeanne Mcgee September 18, 2019 at 2:59 PM Luscious descriptions. Congrats on your win and POTD.

Constance La France September 17, 2019 at 3:05 PM WW congratulations on your win.. nice music and reading

Richard Lamoureux September 17, 2019 at 7:32 AM So well done. I also like the graphic. I see this is doubly special. Congrats on your win and POTD

Regina Mcintosh September 14, 2019 at 11:50 PM Congratulations and prayers

Anne-Lise Andresen September 14, 2019 at 2:37 PM - Congratulations, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One September 14, 2019 at 12:09 PM Great lines of alliteration as always.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Jennifer Proxenos September 13, 2019 at 12:44 AM This poem ^WW^ is beyond congratulations, it is: supercalafragelisticexpialadocious - don't know if I got the phrase right, but I hope so. Your POTD is spectacular as always, intense and with dictionary by my side and buckets of concentration I understood it kudos my dear friend. Forgive me for my belated replies lately but moving home and working, packing and poetry has exhausted me, have divided into 3 pieces, it's not working! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Hello There September 12, 2019 at 6:08 PM Congrats :)

Vladislav Raven September 12, 2019 at 6:05 PM Dropping back with belated congratulations on your Poem Of The Day Honour with this wonderful piece my friend. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend always....Mike.

Winged Warrior September 12, 2019 at 8:11 AM Thank you, everyone...for your lovely comments plus support...and for making this poem potd...your friendly neighborhood poet...^WW^ :o)

Alexis Y. September 12, 2019 at 3:04 AM Wow! WW, You met the contest challenge in spades. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Well done. I wish I could of luck in the contest. Congratulations on the poem of the day. You deserved it. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Brandy Nicole September 11, 2019 at 5:27 PM Empty Love. Love embracing the heart, only for show. Unfulfilling indeed. So sad. You have expressed this emotion very well my Warrior with Wings. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. May Love embrace You Completely. ~ Brandy

Eve Roper September 11, 2019 at 3:29 PM Fantastic, ^W^, congratulations on POTD. Hugs

Chris Green September 11, 2019 at 11:34 AM Hey there, look at that. The site sure does know good poetry when they see it. Congrats my friend on your honor here POTD. Well deserved.

John Hamilton September 11, 2019 at 10:35 AM Back with congrats on POTD!

Sunlite Wanter September 11, 2019 at 10:05 AM Congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart September 11, 2019 at 10:05 AM Yikes! You nailed this theme. Great write! Congrats on POTD and good luck in the contest! xomo

Bobby May September 11, 2019 at 9:35 AM Congratulation WW on PTOD, I knew this was a winner my friend!!

Arturo Michael September 11, 2019 at 8:52 AM 'An anemic vampire' I like that one...even, 'Discombobulation drives the day' Congratulation WW on PTOD

Maria Williams September 11, 2019 at 7:21 AM Creative and artistically depicted John. As always your golden pen flows imaginatively leaving your reader wanting more. Bravo and good luck in the contest, and congratulations on your well deserved POTD ....Maria Hugs

Sandra Adams September 11, 2019 at 7:11 AM Nice writing my friend. I am not surprised to see this as POTD but congratulations are in order :)

Vijay Pandit September 11, 2019 at 7:08 AM Ornamental words--congratulation WW, on poem of the day.

Joseph May September 11, 2019 at 6:58 AM Very nicely penned WW...Congrats on POTD

Besma Riabi Dziri September 11, 2019 at 4:44 AM Congratulations, Winged Warrior on your POTD honour! Your artistry and creative poetry deserve acknowledgement and recognition.. Warmest wishes and regards.. God bless you.

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