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Undying love

With every last breath
With every last murmur
Before I close my eyes 
I shall be always grateful for you!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Date: 12/3/2008 2:52:00 AM
Sensational!, laura. Lainie
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Date: 11/28/2008 1:48:00 PM
The ultimate in gratitude and depth of love. Much said in just four lines. Simply stated but effective. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 8:38:00 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
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Date: 11/15/2008 8:12:00 PM
such an awesome write, take care D0nyce
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Date: 11/12/2008 7:36:00 PM
Beautiful write full of so much gratitude. Love, Chitra
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:42:00 PM
Couldn't be more lovely! Sweet poem, Laura! ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/12/2008 3:15:00 PM
Stunning! Such a beautiful, grateful write. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/12/2008 2:01:00 PM
Romanticism at its best!
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Date: 11/12/2008 1:22:00 PM
What a beautiful write. The poem is awesome, the message is beautiful, the voice is romantic. Well done!
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