Undying Love

With every last breath
With every last murmur
Before I close my eyes 
I shall be always grateful for you!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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George   Avatar
December 3, 2008 at 2:52 AM
Sensational!, laura. Lainie
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November 28, 2008 at 1:48 PM
The ultimate in gratitude and depth of love. Much said in just four lines. Simply stated but effective. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Keep on writing! Karen
Coet Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 8:38 AM
I enjoyed this poem. I would like for our editorial board to have the opportunity to consider it for Blue Fog Journal’s “Contemporary Romantic Love Poems” anthology. If you are interested please review the submission guidelines at the following link: http://bluefogjournal.com/call-for-submission/. Sincerely, ED COET Editor, Blue Fog Journal
White Avatar
November 15, 2008 at 8:12 PM
such an awesome write, take care D0nyce
Lakhera Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 7:36 PM
Beautiful write full of so much gratitude. Love, Chitra
Richards Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 3:42 PM
Couldn't be more lovely! Sweet poem, Laura! ~ Carrie
Winter Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 3:15 PM
Stunning! Such a beautiful, grateful write. Love, Shar
Moreno Avatar
November 12, 2008 at 2:01 PM
Romanticism at its best!
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November 12, 2008 at 1:22 PM
What a beautiful write. The poem is awesome, the message is beautiful, the voice is romantic. Well done!
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