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Understanding

How old will I be at the dawn of my death? This thought ripples through my mind in the twilight of my days Where I sit to ponder as a menagerie of animals wander across my view This has been my ancestral home for generations Where frangipani grows wild and mockingbirds fight for turf It's where the setting sun is the color of vermilion And pellucid clouds infuse a luscious soft glow I've walked every blade of grass that crosses its meadows And have felt the breath of its soul with my own When I rest by one of its ponds I remember, it doesn't matter, for I have lived 1/8/18 contest 10 Words 10 Lines

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Date: 1/17/2018 10:43:00 PM
Great job arrange the 10 words, congratulations on your win, Frederic. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:35:00 AM
Frederic this beautiful.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:33:00 PM
A beautiful poem of reminiscence and understanding Frederic. Lush imagery. Congratulations on your lovely win with your amazing write. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2018 7:52:00 PM
Ahhhh ... Just beautiful Frederic!!! Congratulations on your placement!!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:34:00 PM
Still a FAVE for me, Frederic. Congrats on your awesome poem.
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Date: 1/11/2018 5:41:00 PM
Congratulations Frederic :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 4:58:00 PM
Hi Frederic, Good use of the chosen words. I enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 3:01:00 PM
Wonderful poem Frederick: Its how I sometimes feel knowing that the end is inevitable. We can only live our best and love life. Congratulations on your nice placement.
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Date: 1/11/2018 2:56:00 PM
Great use of the ten words Frederic... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/9/2018 8:28:00 AM
beautifully expressed dear Frederic, good luck SO will love it, :) -luloo
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Date: 1/8/2018 8:55:00 PM
Wow - very impressive twist. Your poem is a FAVE with me. Awesome - fabulously done, Frederic.
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:38:00 PM
a reflective, meaningful work that makes me discern life's stages, frederick... wonderful job!..huggs
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Date: 1/8/2018 1:10:00 PM
- What you say in the last line is the most important thing in life, Frederic - Bravo ... very well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 10:03:00 AM
Nice...I like the concept of the poem and conclusion too...All the best Frederic
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:44:00 AM
You did so well with this Frederic and I love the ending too. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 1/8/2018 9:44:00 AM
Breathtaking! My favourite that I've seen so far, my best to you in the contest, already a winner for me! xomo :)
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