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Under This Weeping Willow

I am missing you mommy, so I took the bus to visit today. Oh, the p a s s i n g scenery is so lovely . . . I am lost in a sea of green swaying trees, in my hands I hold RED roses from my garden- I open the heavy gate . . . to rows and rows of infinite s h a d e s of grey stones and the liquid murmur of birds- r e s t mommy in peace . . . under this w e e p i n g willow tree - ____________________ May 14, 2017 Free Verse/Under This Weeping Willow Copyright Protected, ID 900444 Written for the contest, One of Five/70 words sponsor, Laura Loo First Place

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Date: 5/28/2017 7:55:00 PM
Beautiful, heartfelt and so well written. I hear the trees weeping. Kai
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Date: 5/27/2017 6:38:00 PM
Beautiful, sad, and somber, as always, Constance. Congratulations on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/26/2017 9:32:00 AM
Sad and oh so lovely. Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 5/15/2017 6:16:00 AM
Ah, wondrous beauty expounds from this elaborate work, Constance! I am still amazed at your fine work, it is very well done...Have you published any of your work? I would love to see your poetry in a book, I would buy it! Awesome work my friend!!
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Date: 5/14/2017 9:53:00 PM
tres bien cher, I know this feelings,
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