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Under the Moon

Above a full moon dances with the billowing clouds, The ornate gate creaks as I push to enter; A winding road, shines in the moonlight, and beckons me, I glide past sleeping gnarled tree branches. Above a full moon dances with the billowing clouds, Angel statues do not comfort me from my sadness; The maze of stone cold tombs weep in the moonlight, I drift there under the full moon beautifully ethereal. And then I hear the first bird song . . . _________________________ January 5, 2016 Verse

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2016 9:43:00 PM

BROKEN, Congrats on your Moonish win. Luv LINDA -

Constance La France
Date: 1/26/2016 9:48:00 PM

Linda, thanks for visiting my poem, appreciate

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/14/2016 4:29:00 AM

Congrats on awesome win with this wonderful write Broken.

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2016 7:11:00 AM

Upma, thanks for visiting my poem and for the wonderful !

Skat A

Date: 1/13/2016 10:44:00 PM

Broken, Congrats on your win............ Luv ** SKAT **

Constance La France
Date: 1/14/2016 7:11:00 AM

thanks

Etienne Lariviere

Date: 1/10/2016 1:46:00 AM

fantastique

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 12:58:00 PM

Etienne, thank you, love that fantastique ~

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/9/2016 7:17:00 PM

As you can well guess , I loved this poem!

Constance La France
Date: 1/10/2016 12:58:00 PM

Arthur, I love this too, so happy you selected this one for your poetry site ~

Carl Fraser

Date: 1/7/2016 2:48:00 PM

Great imagery here in this piece. I could picture myself right there walking among the cold tombs. Great write. Blessings Carl

Constance La France
Date: 1/7/2016 5:24:00 PM

Carol, thanks for the visit and the nice comment, appreciate ~

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/6/2016 9:22:00 AM

Ethereal is the word. Captivating lines you have here, BW. Love the repetition of the first line which grabs the reader's immediate attention. Kim

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 9:41:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the visit and the captivating, gosh I like that word !

Viv Wigley

Date: 1/6/2016 12:44:00 AM

On my visits to the cemetery, I am always fascinated by the dichotomy of the stillness and death beneath me, and the canopy of life and song above me. Exclusive, but one without the other would be mournful. A lovely piece, BW, good luck. Viv x

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:51:00 AM

Oh Viv, thanks for that wonderful comment, it was like a poem, so lovely, and thanks for the lovely, appreciate that so much !

White Sage

Date: 1/5/2016 7:16:00 PM

excellent write Mystic, the theme's so fascinating....good luck in the contest

White Sage
Date: 1/6/2016 1:59:00 AM

am so sorry BW, I end up mixing names...

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:52:00 AM

Sage, of course you mean broken wings, thanks for the fascinating, appreciate

James Inman

Date: 1/5/2016 6:49:00 PM

A ray of hope. Lovely BW.

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:53:00 AM

James, thanks for the lovely ~

Dalia Shahein

Date: 1/5/2016 5:44:00 PM

This is a real beauty I congrats u for this lovely and brilliant poem my dear , this is a winner poem for me....best of luck in the contest and hugs / / :) dalia

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:54:00 AM

Dalia, thank you so much for the nice comment and visit !

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/5/2016 4:53:00 PM

This is beautiful poetry, deep and profound,,just love this Constance happy new year

Constance La France
Date: 1/6/2016 12:54:00 AM

Harry, thanks for the beautiful and the love, appreciate and happy new year to you also