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she waited for him dark hair blowing in the night and then he was there he held her tight against him their kiss deep and sweet ____________________________ March 4, 2015 Poetry/Tanka/under the full moon Copyright Protected, 03-647-276-04 All Rights Reserved, 2015, Constance La France For the Standard contest, Get Romantic, Visual 1 sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 04/2015 Fourth Place

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Casarah Nance

Date: 3/11/2015 5:31:00 PM

Romantic, like a romance novel, your poem sets the perfect scene, grats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/9/2015 12:09:00 AM

Beautiful words of passion to go with that full moon...congrats on your win...hugs, Rhonda

Skat A

Date: 3/8/2015 6:17:00 PM

BROKEN, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win ~SKAT~

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/8/2015 1:33:00 PM

Beautiful and romantic ;) hope your weekend is a great one.. love and hugs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/8/2015 11:55:00 AM

Broken, Congratulations, a mighty romantic win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/7/2015 6:44:00 PM

Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/7/2015 3:22:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2015 2:48:00 PM

so beautifully romantic many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/7/2015 8:35:00 AM

Congrats on your win! Lovely romantic verses. Hugs, Kimberly

John Lawless

Date: 3/7/2015 7:54:00 AM

This tanka is beautifully simple and simply beautiful. Well done and congrats on the win.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 3/7/2015 5:46:00 AM

great tanka Constance. Congrats on win...rajat

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/6/2015 11:37:00 PM

I like how you simply described the picture, and that is exactly how i saw it too, constance. the kisses sweet as those apples by them on the ground. Congrats for your win.

Vassilis Comporozos

Date: 3/6/2015 7:52:00 AM

So simple, so true,so wonderful, a real love poem!

David Meade

Date: 3/4/2015 7:43:00 PM

Your words captured my imagination and I felt the wind that carried the scent of love . . . it lead me to the passionate encounter . . . delightful and delicious. 7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2015 5:01:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading your passionate work..Reads like a winner..Thanks for the visit..Sara..The first poem is still about the same in my life..

Janet Eaton

Date: 3/4/2015 6:37:00 AM

Love this very romantic. Good luck in the contest. Have a great day. Janet