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Undefined Uncertainties

Dahlin’ , I see you, taming truths tonight whilst standing as tall glass of fine fire, Your eyes are adorned in all the right kind of desire, Would you rather roam your captivating glare all over my soul, to admire? Or shall this be left as a mess within hot wire, Would you taste my spirit through a glimpse, Oh! that’s what your goals require ? There is no need of your pretty lines of love ticking to expire, But hold on to that golden glaze which you did spread thick on scintillating sapphire, Have you heard , I am a poet, you need to hit hard and get deep for me to glow and inspire, Maybe , Us together, Would be your best attire, Our nights could ambitiously be turned into an ambiguous choir, We would be louder than any amplifier, All my edges are aching to make you perspire, Or If I present my skin , You the soul searcher may wish to hustle higher , So Could Our unforgettable uncertainties be the undefined reason to aspire ?

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Date: 11/11/2023 3:55:00 PM
I would like to see you rewrite this one in a different form. Monorhyme is to limiting. There is potentially an extraordinary poem hiding in these verses.
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Date: 10/14/2023 4:38:00 PM
The way a woman presents herself is poetry.
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Date: 10/14/2023 1:55:00 PM
Your passion fuels the rhythm in this scorching Monorhyme, The Aura Rhymes. "You the soul searcher may wish to hustle higher , So Could Our unforgettable uncertainties be the undefined reason to aspire?" So true when a seeker. Engaging and passionate poetry. A FAV for my list, A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Date: 10/13/2023 7:07:00 AM
This is a hottie. Amplified love? Let's hope you're not living in a big apartment building ;)
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Date: 10/13/2023 5:52:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/13/2023 3:36:00 AM
“Have you heard , I am a poet, you need to hit hard and get deep for me to glow and inspire” ah that is such a fierce line! I always admire how you rhyme, your name defines you Poetry. So creative and profound! Loving the cadence and also how your words are woven in such a captivating manner! Iv heard this read by few spoken word artists is maybe why i hear these words spoken as i read! Brilliant! Im faving this
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Date: 10/13/2023 2:45:00 AM
taming truths tonight whilst standing as tall glass of fine fire, Oooo that sounds sexaaaaay dahlin!! Would you rather roam your captivating glare all over my soul,.. my my !!! I need water!!! you need to hit hard and get deep for me to glow and inspire,.. damn rite!! Our nights could ambitiously be turned into an ambiguous choir, Amen!!! This piece is just soo exhilarating!!
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