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Within a calm of sentient breaths, I ascend above this continental noise slowly, past dimensions of inner ripples, a buoyant weight twirls in spiral orders farther than crests of moon, liquid... here , within the vortex of holy grace shines my presence unknown, and yet aware that galaxies surround this certain oneness with light immeasurable. where nothing can be defined except the full acceptance that I am eternal. Anthony Slausen's Nothing Contest 9/19/2015

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Skat A

Date: 9/24/2015 11:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win... SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/22/2015 10:40:00 AM

Hey Nette, god win. LINDA

M.N.I.W M.N.I.W

Date: 9/22/2015 12:23:00 AM

Nice poem. Well worth an award.

David Mohn

Date: 9/21/2015 10:41:00 PM

I love the way you seem to lose yourself in the writing process...seamlessly stellar

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/21/2015 2:25:00 AM

Magical way with words nette, that's u my friend! Congrats on superb write n win!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/20/2015 2:45:00 PM

A 7-plus, for sure! It's easy to see how this lovely poem of transcendence won! Congrats Janice

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/20/2015 1:10:00 PM

Love your journey from nothing into a whole! Congrats Nette on your win!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 9/20/2015 10:52:00 AM

Nicely Done Nette, congrats on your win!

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/20/2015 9:51:00 AM

Nette, what an amazing journey you image in of our flight into the realm where meditation leads us. "only a cradle of eternity greeting the god within...I become nothing but whole." Absolutely stunning. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! 7+Fav, Hugs, Sandra

CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/20/2015 9:46:00 AM

As a person who meditates, I deeply and sincerely appreciate your write, it is beautiful ... CayCay

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/20/2015 9:26:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your 1st place win in the "Nothing" contest it was well deserved:-) Alexis

Jan Allison

Date: 9/20/2015 9:17:00 AM

beautifully penned Nette many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/19/2015 3:56:00 PM

Mystical and powerful write here! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/19/2015 12:03:00 PM

It's always interesting to see how you'd present in your elegant style any contest theme, Nette. I do struggle with "I am at risk of a swarming of flight into nothingness..." but I really appreciate the fluidity of each line. Good luck, Nettie! huggs

Emile Pinet

Date: 9/19/2015 11:54:00 AM

This poem captures a state of awareness through meditation, an inward look if you like, into the primal stuff of life and myth. The author goes deep into the core of the human psyche and unveils some building blocks of our beings. The inner awakening's enhanced by an aura of nirvana that quiets the soul into submission. Emile. #7

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2015 8:54:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your contest entry..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit by my work..Your comments were uplifting..Sara

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 9/19/2015 5:45:00 AM

superb Nette love this poem gl in contest hugs 7

Manny Paras

Date: 9/19/2015 5:10:00 AM

Deepening one's union with the self and a god becomes alive through your inimitable poetry. I like the spiritual nature of this one as " I become nothing but whole." And seeing your greetings on my work makes me smile. Thank you, Nette

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/19/2015 4:31:00 AM

The opening of inner path is near, dear Nette! An enlightening poem of inner knowledge and beauty! A seven.