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Left alone in a dreary mood, utterly broken With none to lean on and look for, She tethered her soul to sordid gloom, And chained her fancy, never letting soar Dull were the days and sore were the nights, Time slouched on in mechanical beats, Mind devoid of any buoyant thoughts, Senses shut to every cheery throb of life, She lay awake, staring at the ceiling above, Her eyes so lost in a fixed stare, Never a smile lighted her stony face, Nor a gleam of hope brightened up her brain. Inertia crept over from head to foot. She had long lost her zest for life, With life saps drained out like an empty well, She felt nothing but the heat of scorching drought. Nothing could move her grief laden soul, None could lift the weight off her back, Embers of fire sparked from the anvil of her heart, Heaves of sighs escaped from her parched mouth, She wriggled and writhed in unspeakable pain, Her spirits sank deeper into a slithery marsh, She saw around only a thick pall of gloom, Or was it a projection of her own self? Anguish gnawed her nerves and sinews, Flames of pain danced within her spine, She felt her head beginning to reel, And the heavy weight of lead all around her neck. She felt being pushed down to abysmal depths, And the octopus tightening its tentacles all around Who on earth will set me free? What on earth can lift me up? With thundering force the question shook her weary self. She sprang to her feet and broke loose her chains, She found she was but in self – exile, A captive entrapped within boundless space. She saw the door opening to infinite lengths, And the arched horizon looming larger than life, Unbroken, she spread her wings and propelled up, And darted through the clouds to distant shores (Own Story) Subject UNBROKEN ''U'' Contest, New Poems Only Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 11/11/2021 6:03:00 PM
Remarkable epiphany there, Valsa! Up, up and away! :) gw
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Date: 11/11/2021 6:09:00 PM
You have used the right word... ! Yes, it was an 'epiphany'. You have hit the nail on the head ! Thank you once again Gershon !
Date: 11/11/2021 5:12:00 PM
Breaking free, span of wings to fly!
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Date: 11/11/2021 6:05:00 PM
Yes, indeed... ! Though couldn't fly to great heights, I could flap my wings.... ! Ha...ha. So grateful to you Kim for visiting my page again....
Date: 11/11/2021 1:44:00 PM
True feelings display their own story and compose their own poetry.. Brave hearts and beautiful souls would not succumb to grief and despair.. rather seal their wounds, and rise from the ashes transformed and evoluted.. No gain without pain.. Your poignant poetry is just a wonderful validation of such unbreakable soul.. great poetry, Valsa deserving an outshining placement. My deepest regards and blessings. Love and hugs.
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Date: 11/11/2021 6:01:00 PM
Your comment itself is poetry Besma. I feel you have so much of empathy in you. From a depressed state, I could emerge into cheer, partly because my sickness got under control and partly because of my changed mindset... both I believe was by the grace of God. Your words are so soothing. Thank you dear Besma from the bottom of my heart.... love and hugs!
Date: 11/11/2021 5:40:00 AM
I like the uplifting turn toward the end of your story, Valsa. And of course it is true to life, because it is your reality. Emotions evoke throughout--so well written. Win BIG!
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Date: 11/11/2021 5:51:00 PM
Yes, it was a dramatic turn ! Circumstances and mindset became favourable all of a sudden ! Thank you Vijay for your great encouragement and lovely comment !
Date: 11/11/2021 2:38:00 AM
oh my, your writing is excellent dear Valsa...such a sad and deep write for the contest...which you had mentioned as your own story too...and from your reply to comment below, I understood you had been bedridden for months...I hope you are well now...A warm welcome to Soup family ...hoping to read more of your inspiring poems...Hugs...~ Ani
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Date: 11/11/2021 3:55:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Ani... ! Now I am back almost to normal health. I had rheumatoid arthrits which is a chronic condition. At that time in 2008 I was afflicted with chikungunya... a viral attack. These two combined incapacitated me. I underwent the kind of depression I have described in my poem. It was to come out that I started writing..... at a very late age unlike you. By God's grace, now I am OK. Thank you so much for your lovely response.
Date: 11/10/2021 10:31:00 PM
Wow. What emotions must have gripped the soul. This is pure poetry. Best for a win.
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Date: 11/10/2021 10:43:00 PM
Thank you so much Victor.... ! This is my own story. So it has got a spontaneity of its own. When I got bedridden for months, I turned to writing to escape boredom and depression. Before that I hadn't written even a line of verse. Later it became a passion and for the last 12 years, I have been writing poems. Thanks for your uplifting comment.

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