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Quote By Poet: "Pretty clouds filled with water, then it rains down." An umbrella I will buy, it will help keep me dry. The rain clouds are up very high, looks like they want to cry. Staying dry I will try, as I watch for the bright blue sky. I could go for some hot coffee and pie, as I am watching this storm pass bye.

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Date: 8/25/2023 12:01:00 PM
Nothing like an umbrella and a cozy nook for a piece of pie on a rainy day! Paula, you have captured this coziness perfectly! Congratulations on your win! Bouquets for your success!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/25/2023 12:55:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun Umbrella write. Yes, a cozy nook with a piece of warm pie/hot coffee is great on a rainy day. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/18/2023 2:42:00 AM
mmmm coffee and pie, you make it sound so inviting; congratulations
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/21/2023 11:58:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun Umbrella write. Yes, rain/coffee/pie can make a day smile. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/14/2023 1:13:00 PM
Back with my congratulations on your win in Constance’s contest Paula. Blessings Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/15/2023 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back here again. Glad you like this fun Umbrella Rhyme write. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/14/2023 10:22:00 AM
Dropping back with Congrats on your win Paula
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2023 11:05:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you enjoyed my Umbrella Rhyme write. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/14/2023 8:18:00 AM
"3 Place" ~ Umbrella ~ Date Written: 8/10/2023
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Date: 8/13/2023 8:39:00 PM
A Lovely little poem, cute and beautifully rhyming ! Congratulations on your great win, dear Paula !
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2023 11:02:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you. Glad you like my cute/fun Umbrella Rhyme write. Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/13/2023 1:23:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Paula :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/14/2023 11:00:00 AM
Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Good to see you back again. Glad you enjoyed my write.  Hugs... Have a blessed day.....................
Date: 8/12/2023 5:15:00 AM
Lovely rhymes here Paula! I will have some pie with you for sure!! Stay dry and Happy Saturday xxoo
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2023 8:03:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like this fun "Umbrella" write. No "Umbrella" needed here. We need rain/dry. Happy Saturday... Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/11/2023 3:21:00 PM
Paula, that was a lovely poem written in monorhyme. It seems as though the words are floating effortlessly.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/12/2023 8:01:00 AM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you found my words floating effortlessly in my fun "Umbrella" write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/11/2023 8:27:00 AM
- This summer we really should have had an umbrella ... but, a bit difficult to use an umbrella when I have a dog in each hand ... a lovely poem, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:19:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this fun "Umbrella" write. We need rain, send some my way. Guess an umbrella and walking 2 dogs would be hard to do. How about walking between the rain drops???? Hahaha!!! Hugs... Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/11/2023 1:17:00 AM
Lovely:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:15:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this "Umbrella" write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 6:09:00 PM
Paula, I chose to write a n umbrella poem for the contest too. Love this one of yours. Best wishes, Belle
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:14:00 PM
Thanks for your note and for your best wishes. Good to see you. Glad you love my fun "Umbrella" write. "Good Luck" with your Umbrella write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 3:09:00 PM
Hello Paula, a lovely poem about the umbrella and the rain. I enjoyed it. Hugs /Darlene\
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/11/2023 4:33:00 PM
Hello Paula, Yes i enjoyed this poem. Enjoy your evening Paula. Haaaave a blessed evening. /Dalene/
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:13:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Umbrella" write. I enjoyed writing it. Hugs.... Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 2:47:00 PM
Keep that umbrella handy, I see we both chose umbrella, Very nicely done
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:11:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you like my fun "Umbrella" write. Yes, keep the umbrella handy. "Good Luck" with your write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 2:36:00 PM
Hot coffee and pie now you are speaking my language girl, :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:09:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Umbrella" write. Hot coffee/pie is good in any language. Extra good on a rainy day.  Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 2:14:00 PM
A nice Monorhyme poem, Paula. The words seem to just slip off of your tongue. Hugs, Bill
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:07:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed this "Umbrella" write. They rolled off my fingers. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 2:07:00 PM
lovely penning, we all need an umbrella yann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2023 2:06:00 PM
Thanks for your note. Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed my "Umbrella" write. I enjoyed writing this fun write. Have a blessed day/weekend.....................
Date: 8/10/2023 11:00:00 AM
Umbrella  ~ Date Written: 8/10/2023
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