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this is just me mumbling, mumbling past 3 am

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/5/2012 10:05:00 PM

Nikko, I have so much catching up on reading my fav poets' poetry...this tanka has such strong meaning and I believe I have written many scribbled pages in my younger years...should have gave them to the person I was writing to also...We are both dreamers and lovers it seems! Gwendolen

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2012 2:27:00 PM

I like this, Nikko. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/2/2012 9:21:00 PM

Congratulations Nikko on your well writtten Tanka and win. Love, Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/2/2012 10:27:00 AM

congrats Nikko sweet friend on an awesome win for these elegant lines of Tanka poetry.. oh so sweet like u ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/2/2012 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Susan's contest Nikko. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/7/2010 8:24:00 AM

beautiful tanka, congrats on your win in the contest

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/7/2010 4:51:00 AM

Awe this sounds like me :) "the passion ablaze part" just kidding.. Congratulations on your win in the contest Nikko!!

John Freeman

Date: 10/6/2010 5:11:00 PM

Congratulations Nikko on your poem's top ten spot. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/6/2010 3:27:00 PM

Congrats Nikko on your win in Chris's contest with this excellent Tanka entry.. enjoy another sweet victory my sweet friend with luv today..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/6/2010 2:54:00 PM

Yes, sanctuary in our own writings!! Great approach and congratulations, dear friend. LUv, Andrea

James Fraser

Date: 10/6/2010 12:56:00 PM

Many congratulations Nikko on your win in Chris's contest with this wonderful Tanka >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/6/2010 10:55:00 AM

Secrets of the heart Tanka. Congratulations on your high placement. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/6/2010 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nikko in Chris D. Aechtner's contest "T(h)anka You". Love, Carol

De R

Date: 10/6/2010 9:06:00 AM

People are usually afraid to express their feelings directly, but they can't keep it all bottled inside either. To write about your love for someone seems the best way and no one can't find out. Congrats on your win with this beautiful write!:) Hugs,Emilia

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/6/2010 8:11:00 AM

Oh...how I do remember those days...writing every feeling made it seem more romantic, kept tight in a little book that had a key! :) Congratulations, Nikko!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/6/2010 5:59:00 AM

Congratulations on this well mdeserved win. nikko

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/6/2010 5:45:00 AM

absolutely excellent Nikko! congrats on your win - well deserved! you are such a sweetheart you know, thanks for your thoughtful congrats. love and hugs always, shar xoxo

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/6/2010 1:48:00 AM

Another poem which is different, from the norm, in this contest, i really like this Nikko. congrats on your placement. Harry

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/24/2010 6:30:00 PM

me again, just here bothering your poems..lol,,itis really cool,,reminds me off when you are young. And we do things like that on a paper...i post a comment on one of your blogs,,Have you read my latest..later Nikko,..p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/6/2010 5:57:00 AM

nice poem, and LOL to your comment, i really did not think you climb trees. I do how ever and I am 27 years old. I only wroth about the hives is because one time I got a reaction on bad food and did not want to show my face..lol. it looked ugly.....about the wedding ring I just imagined life gives you a go all the time. About not having a life, do not say that. i guess I have to say that about myself to lol; enjoyed all your sijo's this morning..p.d.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/2/2010 12:25:00 PM

wow, I agree this is a winning poem! so much truth so many can relate to and so exquisitely stated! awesome write. nikko, you left me such an amazing comment I could just hug you to pieces! thank you - so beautiful and thoughtful of you and so sincerely appreciated. love& hugs, shar xo

Jay Loveless

Date: 6/2/2010 10:02:00 AM

I really like this. ~Rain

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2010 7:56:00 PM

oh, boy, yours didn't win either?? Crap, this was just wonderful , lovely lady!! HOw did I ever miss it. And thanks for your kind comments tonight. LUv, Andrea

Date: 5/26/2010 3:11:00 PM

This is a heartfelt piece. I do think writers use words to pour out what is never said. I found myself rereading this a few times trying to take it all in. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comments. Karen

Brian Strand

Date: 5/26/2010 8:43:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest.Rgds Brian