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Ugliness of a Shriveled Rose

UGLINESS OF A SHRIVELED ROSE To youth this dried up flower represents ugliness, but that seasoned rose is a prime memory. It had its regality of soft petals, his pure sensual pleasure - whole face breathed the bouquet - the amorous scent, felt the allure, the softness of breast and cheek. This dried up flower looks fragile but it has withstood the test of time. Each pucker and wrinkle is a memorial, a story that would pluck you bald. To the lover, this old wild rose, so wise, can still make you smile and weep, make you laugh in your sleep, stroke your back in comfort and in sexual retreat. The ugliness unfolds the unforgettable prose. Youth is but a toe in the oceanic shore. But young tart, I have dived in full throttle, felt the languid waters envelope me. Life lived to the fullest is beauty! Kim Rodrigues (c) 2017

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Date: 4/14/2017 12:00:00 PM
This is one your masterpiece, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/14/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal!
Date: 4/12/2017 9:09:00 AM
Yes yes yes yes, and another resounding yes to this write. I must learn the message of this poem, dear, and embrace it as I near my 50th birthday. There is the beauty of experience one can never take away. Beautiful write. I applaud you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/12/2017 9:46:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eileen! There is something freeing being on this side of fifty! I take in all I see and hear and sense with extra fervor. It is wonderful!

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