Paul Callus Poet Tyburn

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Two-Faced

A tyburn is a six line poem consisting of 2,2,2,2,9,9 syllables. 
The first four lines rhyme and are all descriptive words. 
The last two lines rhyme and incorporate the 
1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 4th lines as the 5th to 8th syllables.
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winsome
awesome 
fearsome
loathsome
man of her dreams – winsome, awesome treat
till hurt, betrayed – fearsome, loathsome cheat.

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Contest: Write Me a Tyburn
Sponsor: Kim Rodrigues
Placed 1st

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Angela Crabtree January 26, 2021 at 2:07 PM Wow! Perfect write, Paul. Hope you have a great night :)

Eileen Manassian March 27, 2020 at 3:12 PM You are a genius...I can say no more. Paul Callus March 29, 2020 at 5:27 AM You are too kind, Eileen....thank you [but I'll willingly accept your sincere praise:)] Hugs // paul

Susan Ashley February 24, 2018 at 11:07 AM Paul, returning with a big congratulations for your wonderful first place win with this masterfully written poem. Warmest wishes always. ~Susan Paul Callus February 24, 2018 at 1:44 PM A double thank you for a double visit, Susan:) Your congrats and support are much appreciated. ~ Warm regards // paul

Pandita Sietesantos February 20, 2018 at 9:44 AM BIG congratulations to you - my dear friend, Paul, I am always thrilled by your amazing pieces and this one in particular is exquisite - a powerful message cleverly delivered with a few powerful articulate words! Perhaps, one day when I feel brave enough, I will give this challenging new form a try :-)! Love and hugs. Pandita Paul Callus February 20, 2018 at 10:46 AM What a pleasure to have you stopping by with such lovely and encouraging comments, Pandita:) I hope the new year is treating you well:) ~ Love and hugs // Paul

Barbara Barry-Nishanian February 18, 2018 at 5:29 PM "Restrictive,' you replied ...is an understatement! What a challenge, New form for me too as John said. Really...CONGRATS! bbn Paul Callus February 19, 2018 at 10:47 AM Thank you for the generous comments, Barbara...they are truly appreciated:) Pleased to have made your acquaintance. Regards // paul

Old Buck February 17, 2018 at 3:34 PM Paul: I wouldn't even try this, but you've done a splendid job here. Keep them coming. And thank you for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck Paul Callus February 17, 2018 at 4:18 PM You are too kind, OB!! Thank you! Pleased to have you stopping by. Regards // paul

Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 8:52 PM This is great stuff, Paul, witty and creative ... congrats, my friend! :-) Paul Callus February 17, 2018 at 4:17 PM Your complimentary feedback is appreciated, my friend...thank you! Regards // paul

Laura Hay February 8, 2018 at 7:18 AM What a very clever piece of work Paul, so deserves its winning pin. Congrats! Warm regards, Laura. Paul Callus February 8, 2018 at 9:34 AM Many thanks, Laura...both comments and congrats are appreciated. ~ Warm regards // paul

John Fleming February 5, 2018 at 2:34 PM I am not really familiar with this form of poetry, Paul. I can see why this was placed first in the contest though -- indeed it is very cleverly constructed! Nicely done, Paul. My very best regards...as always. :) john Paul Callus February 5, 2018 at 3:37 PM Thank you, John; so pleased you enjoyed it. It's a challenging form because it's too restrictive. Best regards to you too:) // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2018 at 7:34 PM Hello Paul, I do like your tyburn.I want to say congrats. Regards Darlene De Beaulieu. Paul Callus February 5, 2018 at 3:26 PM Thank you, Darlene. Your comments and congrats are appreciated. Regards // paul

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 3, 2018 at 12:44 PM Back with congrats! xomo :) Paul Callus February 3, 2018 at 1:47 PM A repeat visit is doubly appreciated, Maureen...thank you!:) Wishing you a lovely weekend. // paul

Eve Roper February 1, 2018 at 8:37 PM Paul, back with a big congratulations on this great piece :) Paul Callus February 2, 2018 at 1:02 PM Thank you for revisiting with congrats, Eve:) Have a lovely weekend. Hugs // paul

Line Gauthier February 1, 2018 at 8:02 PM Good one, Paul. Congrats on your win. Paul Callus February 2, 2018 at 1:00 PM Glad you enjoyed it, Line. Thank you. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich February 1, 2018 at 7:51 PM very nicely done, Paul! Congrats for the win. Paul Callus February 2, 2018 at 1:00 PM Thank you, Andrea. Have a nice weekend. // paul

Curtis Moorman February 1, 2018 at 5:45 PM Paul, this is the kind of writing I hope to achieve one day. Great win! Paul Callus February 2, 2018 at 12:58 PM You are too kind, Curtis...thank you:) Regards // paul

Reason A. Poteet February 1, 2018 at 5:40 PM You aced the form, Paul and with a couplet portraying opposites. Congratulations on your top placement. The hard part of dreams is waking up to the truth. Paul Callus February 2, 2018 at 12:40 PM Thank you for the insightful comments and congrats, Reason. Regards // paul

Viv Wigley February 1, 2018 at 4:34 PM Brilliant, Paul, a fine example of the form. Congrats on your 1st! Regards, Viv Paul Callus February 1, 2018 at 4:46 PM Thank you for stopping by with comments and congrats, Viv! Best regards, paul

Roy Pett February 1, 2018 at 4:16 PM Back to offer my congratulations on your well deserved win with this brilliant Tyburn Paul. :)) Paul Callus February 1, 2018 at 4:46 PM Thank you, Roy...a double visit is always appreciated:) Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 2:29 PM Aptly said, Paul! Congrats on 1st place! Paul Callus February 1, 2018 at 3:26 PM This is definitely a lovely surprise, Kim:) Thank you!! Best regards // paul

Eileen Manassian January 28, 2018 at 1:03 AM WOW. I've never written one of these, and I'm not sure I can do it justice as you have. It's wonderful and true...unfortunately. Hugs, dear one. I miss you. Paul Callus January 28, 2018 at 12:07 PM Thank you, Eileen. You too have been missed, but I know you have been abroad enjoying the company of family and friends, especially your daughter. I also was away from Soup for a while, for various reasons. Hugs // paul

Elaine George January 27, 2018 at 9:26 AM A very masterful conveyance of this poetry form, dear Paul. Paul Callus January 27, 2018 at 9:44 AM Thank you Elaine; your lovely comment is much appreciated! Have a nice weekend. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong January 24, 2018 at 3:04 AM An excellent example of this challenging form Paul. I can relate from long ago in my youth. I think it will do well! : ) Paul Callus January 27, 2018 at 9:29 AM Hi Connie....trying my best to catch up with accumulated mail! Life deals out both sweet and sour experiences! Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 24, 2018 at 2:16 AM Never heard of this form before, thanks for a very informative post and a good example.. :D I might try this one time :O Smiles & hugs, olive_eloi Paul Callus January 27, 2018 at 9:25 AM Excuse the late reply, Olive_eloi. I had never heard of this form, either! Do try it, but it's not much fun, too restricted, even for one like me who likes short forms!! Have a lovely weekend. Hugs & smiles // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen January 23, 2018 at 1:06 PM - Awesome, Paul - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus January 23, 2018 at 3:43 PM Thank you for stopping by with your awesome comment, Anne-Lise:) Regards & Hugs // paul

Constance La France January 23, 2018 at 6:54 AM Paul, I think your Tyburn is awesome! Paul Callus January 23, 2018 at 7:24 AM Thank you, Constance:) Pleased to have you stopping by. Regards // paul

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