Two Pair of Shoes

I met a young lady in our local bar
She was a beauty as most of them are
When closin' time came we walked arm in arm
To my old pickup just fresh off the farm
I drove to her place not far from the square
She said it was quiet and peaceful there
She went to change while I watched the news
I saw under her bed two pair of shoes
My eyes flashed forward toward my own fate
The shoes were fourteens and I wore an eight
I left there that night a fear in my heart
Praying out loud that my pickup would start
I dream sometime of the beauty I'd seen
And two pair of shoes that said size fourteen


8/1/2017
For contest Two Pair of Shoes for John Lawlwss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
August 11, 2017 at 4:59 AM
Saved yourself in time! Awesome write. Congrats! :) Sunita
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Very astute observation on your part, great poem on the contest prompt, guess I have no imagination, the prompt didn't work for me, but glad you made the winners circle!
Bradfield Avatar
August 9, 2017 at 9:40 PM
Thanks, John..you have a lot of imagination! You just probably haven't spent as much time in run down bars as I have!!LOL
Borke Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 7:34 PM
Very entertaining!
Bradfield Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Thank you, Hannah!
Raynes Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 11:03 PM
bahahaha run, just run, loved this one, congratulations Larry
Bradfield Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 8:24 PM
Thanks, Lewis!!
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:04 PM
I am so happy to see that your wonderful poem made the list Larry. Congratulations! : )
Bradfield Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:32 PM
Thank you, Connie.
Ashley Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Hi Larry, a witty, entertaining and creative write. I truly enjoyed with a smile. Congrats on your placement :)
Bradfield Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:33 PM
Thank you Susan!!
Wood Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 3:45 PM
hahahaha, LOL Oh this is great one! At least this guy new when to cut and run! hehe Congratulations on making John's list Larry. I really enjoyed this. Thanks.
Bradfield Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 9:34 PM
Thank you, Dean.Men with old pickups don't take many chances heehee.Larry
Lane Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 3:13 PM
I thought I might see your poem on John's winning list, Larry. Well done!
Bradfield Avatar
August 8, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Thank you, Lin!!
Lawless Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 1:44 PM
DAMMIT....Larry....I gagged on a mouthful of coffee when I read this one....
Bradfield Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 1:54 PM
oops...meant "never",John...not "ever" Larry
Bradfield Avatar
August 7, 2017 at 1:52 PM
I have ever gotten a better compliment, John!!! Thank you...Larry
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 3:30 AM
This is really cute and creative Larry. I am sure it will do well in the contest! : )
Bradfield Avatar
August 2, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thanks for the visit and the comment, Connie!..Larry
Lane Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 3:44 PM
A quick get away is always a wise choice under THOSE conditions. How astute you were to notice those humongous shoes! lol Nice write, Larry.
Bradfield Avatar
August 1, 2017 at 4:22 PM
Yes, it was a close one, Lin. Thanks for the kind words..Larry
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