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WHEN A WOMAN LOVES A MAN She circled him a long time till he saw she was a woman he could trust and like. She loved him dearly, never saw that flaw, that one small issue: that he would dislike to bed her with the fire that partners show for that one love that lasts a lifetime long. Where every word and heated move is so engraved in passion, warm, beloved, strong. His distant attitude misunderstood for shyness, such a sweet endearing flaw. She hoped that, in the future, parenthood would make him happy, that his heart would thaw.      Where he liked her, but lusted differently,      She was just sad, she suffered silently. *** WHEN A MAN LOVES A WOMAN I love the silent smiles in her blue eyes; the way she walks on tiptoes through the room; her love for watching cloudless starry skies; how she refers to me as "my dear groom". I love her singing childhood songs with pun; her tinkling laughter while remembering. She lifts my mood by bringing so much fun into my darker days and nights, with zing. I love her, but my love for her falls short, for in my heart I fail to be the one to give her what she needs, because I court a prince, she is my moon, he is my sun.      My heart, so torn, a coward lives in me...      I need to tell her, finally be free. *** 2nd place in contest: Two English Sonnets Sponsor Mark Massey December 13, 2016

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Date: 1/8/2017 10:12:00 PM
Congrats, Darren. Excellent work...Larry
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 11:43:00 PM
Thank you, Larry :)
Date: 1/8/2017 9:58:00 PM
Excellently done, and what a win /|\
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 11:43:00 PM
YAY, thanks Wolfman :)
Date: 1/8/2017 3:41:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Darren:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank Jan :) hugs
Date: 1/8/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations Darren, absolutely stunning sonnets that certainly deserve their place in this contest, well done, Roy.
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Darren White
Date: 1/8/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thank you, Roy :)
Date: 12/18/2016 10:38:00 AM
Nice emotional poems. Good luck
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Darren White
Date: 12/20/2016 1:20:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha :)
Date: 12/15/2016 6:52:00 AM
Two stunning sonnets Darren, you made the man more forthright! :)
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Darren White
Date: 12/15/2016 7:40:00 AM
I realise I did, yes :) I think it's because I only know manly love :D...Thanks!
Date: 12/14/2016 7:29:00 PM
She is the princess of your love...Nicely penned
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Darren White
Date: 12/14/2016 11:01:00 PM
That's a sweet, creative interpretation :) Thanks Joseph.
Date: 12/14/2016 4:52:00 AM
Amazing sonnets Darren - beautifully writen. I had a teacher living his life like that, really sad when people can't live their lives with whom they really love. good luck on the contest :*
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Darren White
Date: 12/14/2016 5:01:00 AM
Yes, it happens more often than people realize. Thanks my friend <3
Date: 12/13/2016 6:30:00 PM
Two strong sonnets flowing with emotional conflict..good luck in the contest
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Darren White
Date: 12/14/2016 2:52:00 AM
I know you write a lot of sonnets, so you telling me these two of mine are strong, that makes me feel proud. Thank you :)
Date: 12/13/2016 4:13:00 PM
Outstanding Darren...This must have taken quite some time.
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Darren White
Date: 12/13/2016 9:19:00 PM
You can say that indeed, Tim. Days and days. But, whatever the outcome, I am happy with them :)
Date: 12/13/2016 2:02:00 AM
Two lovely sonnets Darren I struggle writing this form... shame one stanza couldn't be when a man loves a man or a woman loves a woman ... lets update the song to the 21st century!:-) hugs jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 12/13/2016 2:06:00 AM
hahaha well, Jan, this invited me to write about something that happens so often, and with so much love between two partners, even with the sadness and pain that is there too. There are so many gay men and women who are married and stay married... Or break up revealing the truth. It was a good thing to write about.... with love!
Date: 12/13/2016 1:15:00 AM
An exceptional job, Darren. Well done indeed! They'll go well in the contest I'm sure!
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Darren White
Date: 12/13/2016 1:17:00 AM
Thanks Rick, I hope so. I love writing sonnets, but it's very difficult the same time.

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