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Two Blue Butterflies

two blue butterflies
following me all the day
I am no flower
still they are so close to me
blue butterfly eyes of you




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Placement:10th; (February 2011)

Contest:We Aren't Japanese BUT Please!

Sponsor:Debbie Guzzi

By :kashinath karmakar (16th Feb.2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2012 5:16:00 PM

A quick question for you. Is Yesha a boy or a girl. That's an Indian name, right?

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/21/2011 6:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "any old butterfly poem" contest Kash. Love, Carol

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/20/2011 9:35:00 PM

Loved it Kashi. Many congrats.

Bob Quigley

Date: 10/15/2011 11:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Kash

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/15/2011 8:23:00 PM

Kash, CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for the support in my butterfly contest,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/15/2011 7:54:00 PM

Congrats Kash on a super win with great lines on the butterflies luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/9/2011 4:18:00 PM

Kash, you should enter this in PD's new butterfly contest!! Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/12/2011 10:14:00 PM

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/25/2011 6:17:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of debbie, kashinath

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2011 10:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath, in Debbie's contest. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/24/2011 7:11:00 AM

Congrats Kashinath on your great big win in the Japanese contest my friend.. a super cool write from a super cool poet.. enjoy with luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/24/2011 12:53:00 AM

yeyyy... congrats big-time for this sizzling piece, kashi.. GO! :) huggs, nette

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 2/23/2011 9:27:00 PM

Many congrats Kashinath on clinching big win in Debbie's contest. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2011 9:19:00 PM

Kash, I am so happy to see you made the list!! A BIG congrats to you, my friend. I loved this one just the way it was! It is very clear to me and that's how I love the poetry I read!!

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/23/2011 8:07:00 PM

Wow. Loved it. many congrats.

Joe Inka

Date: 2/23/2011 6:37:00 PM

Great Tanka, congrats on a job well done

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/23/2011 5:28:00 PM

A lovely piece..anything with blue and butterflies in it is a winner with me. Congrats to you..BG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 2/23/2011 1:13:00 AM

what a very sweet tanka, Kashinath! this made me smile-- and hmmm as for that amethyst haiku-- let's just say it's sort of a metaphor for myself? ;) thanks for asking & sorry if I am weird, just wrote what came to mind that time :)

Tara Jennings

Date: 2/22/2011 6:52:00 AM

oh so sweet

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 2/21/2011 11:22:00 AM

Oh Kashinath, This is beautiful, I love butterflies and I have blue eyes. I think this one is just going to have to go into my favs. Wonderful I love it... As Always, Shar

James Fraser

Date: 2/21/2011 11:03:00 AM

Butterfly eyes, just lovely Kashinath....:)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/21/2011 9:12:00 AM

A wonderful write. Thank you for pointing out that Linda's contest was enclosed rhyme. I some how missed that as I quickly read over it. Many thanks. love phyl

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/20/2011 1:26:00 PM

yes a lovers sending...lines 1 & 3 should place US...where are we? don't worry over the strict 5/7/5/7/7 lines 4 & 5 are stupendous! Light & Love [tweak!] lashes cheek dressing/tickle the surface of desire/ sandlewood earlobes

Wilma Neels

Date: 2/20/2011 9:44:00 AM

Kashinath, what a stunning Tanka, you had me smiling with this delightful write.. Thank you for your kind comments and for the compliment regarding my name :)