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TWO AWESOME “A pooch saved my life,” hang out with this dog, his name is Chummy! When I descend from a tree I walk on all fours, use my arms as legs, Adopted by humans when young, now Chummy thinks I’m mummy, Orangutans are vegetarian, but sometimes eat insects and bird eggs! When I descend from a tree I walk on all fours, use my arms as legs, Sleep in a house built for me outside, sleep together me and he, Orangutans are vegetarian, but sometimes eat insects and bird’s eggs! I’m covered in long hair, keep Chummy warm, I love him and he loves me. Sleep in a house built for me outside, often sleep together me and he, One day I felt sick and forlorn, Chummy noticed and barked and barked, I’m covered in long hair, keep Chummy warm, I love him and he loves me. My family run out, guessed something wrong, the vet hurry they remarked. One day I felt sick and forlorn, Chummy noticed and barked and barked, Adopted by humans when young, now Chummy thinks I’m mummy, My family ran out, guessed something wrong, the vet hurry they remarked. “A pooch saved my life,” hang out with this dog, his name is Chummy! Picture 1 ‘Pantoum Rhyme and Personification’ Poetry Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper 21/5/2020

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Date: 7/26/2020 10:31:00 AM
what a heartwarming write - hope this was a big winner. I saw after I'd commented that Omega was POTD - very well deserved indeed
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Date: 7/18/2020 9:33:00 AM
Ahh!! Great story told in poetic form. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/27/2020 10:50:00 AM
U are so good at PONTOUMS, Sis Jen! And the subject matter (great ape and great dog) are as best friends as dogs are to humans! Touching story (Is it true?) Shalom shalom in Jesus CHRISTOS!
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Date: 5/31/2020 9:52:00 AM
I just saw the photo, but yes I think it is true Anil an I love seeing CHRISTOS because it is used in the Greek service all the time and at Easter the choir sings a hymn which has got CHRISTOS ANESTIS in it which means Christ is Risen. It is sung at the Saturday Midnight Service. Blessings - Eirene and Shalom - Jennifer.
Date: 5/25/2020 9:40:00 AM
Very nice! I enjoyed this!
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Date: 5/31/2020 9:46:00 AM
Thank you Kim, God Bless, Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/25/2020 8:28:00 AM
A bond of friendship, Very nicely pebbed Jennifer, GL in the contest..
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Date: 5/31/2020 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Joseph, a bond between animals is too cute to watch and follow - a lovely comment, thank you my friend. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 5/24/2020 4:33:00 AM
What a delightful, awesome relationship, Jenny! Animals sense the hidden meaning of "friends" and bond quickly. I love watching our tortoise and cat playing together and teasing each other. ~ Have a lovely day. Warm regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 5/31/2020 8:27:00 AM
Yes they do bond - we had three labradors because our house we sold was on just under an acre, but when we moved into a secure smaller situation they didn't allow dogs, so our son who also has a a house on a large piece of ground took all three of our Labs. and has two himself - so they have 5 dogs, Mum he says we have our own security company! Warm regards and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/23/2020 10:44:00 AM
This poem goes so well with the photo Jennifer. I think this form is a challenge and have never written one. I think yours turned out great! Best of luck in the contest my friend. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 5/31/2020 6:49:00 AM
Thank-you Connie, You always say the nicest things - you are a beautiful soul and have a beautiful soul. Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 5/22/2020 5:44:00 PM
I enjoyed this fun pantoum, Jenn, best of luck I the contest. Hugs, John
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Date: 5/31/2020 6:42:00 AM
Thank-you John it was a challenge bu I enjoywed every moment of it. Be well and safe. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 5/22/2020 1:10:00 PM
Surely your poetic skill shines here. Three cheers for a win Panagiota xoxo
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Date: 5/31/2020 6:40:00 AM
Thank-you Panagiota mou - that is very sweet of you to say Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 5/22/2020 12:41:00 PM
Adorable and I’m glad there was a good outcome. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:20:00 AM
You are like me, I always like happy endings! Thank you for a lovely comment Rick, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 7:54:00 PM
This pantoum named Chummy is really yummy!
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:19:00 AM
That says it all Gershon my dear friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 2:28:00 PM
What a delightful tale of two best friends - and I love the name Chummy! Best wishes for the contest-
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:16:00 AM
Thank-you Michelle - I think the two of them tgether made a perfect story so I gave it a try. Best wish my friend, Jenifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 2:00:00 PM
They give unconditional love, don't they! Charming sentiments of special bond--a delightful story, Jennifer. All the best.
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:15:00 AM
They absolutely do and only want you to show it, they will love and protect you to their dying day. Thank-you for a lovely comment Vijay, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 1:53:00 PM
I've got one at home...he's not my own...but during this Lockdown... Max was a life saver...Nice write...you put a lot of joy into it...
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:11:00 AM
Dogs are mans best friend and I am sure he has brought you much joy, they have a sense of knowing ow you fell and want to show you by their love. Blessings and hugs Arturo Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 12:51:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, this poem is Awsome! Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 5/31/2020 2:07:00 AM
Hi Darlene, Always have a great day when you wish me one - glad you enjoyed my poem. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 11:34:00 AM
Well done Jennifer. Love the take on the dog and the orangutan making friends. Dogs, cats, horses and monkeys make pets of other animals. Good job here. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/31/2020 2:03:00 AM
Thanks Judy - I thought the picture was so adorable and the Orangutan looked like a darling friend. Blessing,s Jennifer.
Date: 5/21/2020 7:43:00 AM
Youve mastered the pantoum form really well Jennifer. Hope you're well Good luck in the contest Tom
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Date: 5/31/2020 1:57:00 AM
Thank-you Tom - I'm beginning to enjoy the challenge of new styles of poetry. Blessings my friend, Jennifer.

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