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growing up as identical twins can be a bit crazy, funny how some cant tell me and my sister apart, especially when using big words such as " love" we used to fool so many too. Thought this might be a fun experience to share

Written for dodoitsu contest sponsored by Kim Rodrigues

held her heart, thinking of stars he shouldn’t have trusted his sight… it was my twin, he embraced~ awkward tale of lust..

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/2/2024 6:06:00 PM

IE, funny story you tell. Didn't know you have an identical twin. That must be fun. Hope you are both well. Twins make for a very interesting study of nature vs nurture.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/22/2024 10:58:00 PM

It's ready! Get going!! And good night

Hiya Sharma

Date: 4/21/2024 12:21:00 AM

Awwn, lol an amazing dodoitsu poem, with a twist of course! You and your sister are the most kind and beautiful twins, I can tell.. And with the storyline here, he definitely shouldn't have trusted his sight.. You write such witty writes, still with so much elegance and with a humor that still shimmers with poetic depth! Heart and soul are always the prominent rulers in 'love'.. beyond everything.. An enjoyable read ~ keep writing, sending many best wishes.

Tonye George

Date: 4/18/2024 9:55:00 AM

Lol Inky. Didn't know you were a twin. He definitely should have trusted his heart. I always say it's not the body or physical, it's the soul. Cheers.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:09:00 AM

Haha yes, we need to see if its really love they can tell who is who! Thank you sweet soul! I appreciate all your comments on my poems! You truly are a kind soul! Sending you light always

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/17/2024 12:14:00 PM

- Being identical twins will have many challenges, I think ... but mostly fun :) - hugs

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:09:00 AM

Thnk you dear anne lise always

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/17/2024 9:39:00 AM

Hi Inky! This is so full of whimsical delight and a bit of "twins" mischief. You expressed the situation so perfectly in your short lines. The picture is clear as sunlight through your well chosen words and images! My two best friends in college were both twins - not identical - but twins none the less. I thoroughly enjoyed your tale of misdirection and mischievous mistaken identity! Well done! Reminds me of Shakespeare's comedies. Blessings to you dear friend! Samzy.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:20:00 AM

Ah yes i studied shakespeare, twelfth night was fun, altho they were fraternal twins. Thank you so much for visiting. Always a pleasure hearing from you dear samszy! Hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/17/2024 8:07:00 AM

Dear Empress, your story of mistaken identity and playful deception was very interesting. Growing up as twins must have been a whirlwind of shared experiences and mischievous moments. Your dodoitsu captures the humor and complexity of human relationships that sometimes love and attraction can lead us down unexpected paths. What a lighthearted yet thought-provoking tale. I enjoyed every single word. -Blessings, Daniel.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:29:00 AM

Thank you so much always for understanding and for appreciating my writes. Grateful always for your support truly

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/17/2024 7:29:00 AM

Shows, many are more outwardly visual than interior. Yourself and your sister must of had great fun growing up. A meditation in a way. Blessings.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:29:00 AM

So true joe, thank you so much

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/17/2024 5:47:00 AM

twins can be different, never judge them, in my eyes, thanks for the dleicate poem, enjoyed

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:35:00 AM

Thank you dear yann for always reading and for being so supportive

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/17/2024 1:58:00 AM

Twins are always welcome. One wonders who is who.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:40:00 AM

So true thank you dear victor

Paige Hind

Date: 4/16/2024 9:38:00 PM

So sad that people can be just classified to someone as an object, it's the same as just blind lust in my opinion...good luck in the contest

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thank you sweet paige

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/16/2024 8:25:00 PM

Lol. This was good and typical of stories I've heard from other twins.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:46:00 AM

Always grateful for your support dear hilda thank you so very much

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/16/2024 6:14:00 PM

I used to have twin cousins, they loved to play tricks on others too, lol, cute one

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:48:00 AM

Haha awwn yes we did so many when we were in primary school especially. Thank you sweet rose

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/16/2024 1:33:00 PM

Love it, Ink. Soupmail.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:50:00 AM

Thank you my sweet andrea soul aunt! Haha.

Silent One

Date: 4/16/2024 12:09:00 PM

Must be fun having a twin.. I always thought it would be interesting to have a twin as a gemini... I used to date a twin, but I could tell the difference between the two as one was always happy and smiling and the other one was grumpy and angry.... two opposites. but they did have this very powerful spiritual connection.. Best of luck in the contest dear..

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 4:53:00 AM

We definitely di have a very strong and spiritual connection. Thank you silent one! My twin is a fan of your poetry

David Crandall

Date: 4/16/2024 8:19:00 AM

Oh my, that sounds embarrassing. Having a twin sister does seem like a good opportunity to craft mischief.

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 5:04:00 AM

Yes thank you so much dear david for your visit and kindness

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/16/2024 6:52:00 AM

The experience was probably a bit unbearable, yet also quite entertaining. Impressively crafted, with a truly exquisite feeling. Oh wow, it was your identical twin! He hugged me tightly, and we shared a rather awkward anecdote about our deepest longings...

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 5:10:00 AM

Thank you always dr sotto

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/16/2024 6:30:00 AM

Very interesting read!

Ink Empress
Date: 4/20/2024 5:10:00 AM

Thank you

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/16/2024 4:49:00 AM

that is hilarious and probably was a bit awkward. A delightful read! have a pleasant day, hugs Sara

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 4/16/2024 4:22:00 AM

held her heart, thinking of stars. That’s gorgeous feeling aee., Ayayaaaaa… it was my twin, he embrace… awkward tale of lust.. my my awkward indeed… hahahah

The Aura Rhymes

Date: 4/16/2024 4:08:00 AM

Hahah this happens to twins all the time . Good one