Twilight's White

Twilight’s White

Neath twilight’s white,
There streaks a purple cloud,
Where beneath designs the lace of trees,
Against glorious orange and red of sunset.

Here I stand in its shadow.
What does it see that I cannot
What is its hymn to me
At the end of this day?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ajmal Avatar
June 25, 2019 at 5:00 PM
Its a really beautiful poem and I really enjoyed reading it, especially the last stanza, good luck and have a really nice day
Kamoonpuri Avatar
June 14, 2019 at 10:25 AM
What awesome streaks, nature's colours and imagery painted superbly in words in brevity wow. Kudos. Keep writing such delights forever poet. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
Onclaud Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 4:40 PM
each nightfall ends with a hummed psalm... beautiful verse, sun!..huggs
Messina Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 10:52 PM
Very Nice Sunlite! Beautiful write :)
Sands Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 6:01 PM
Beautiful Sunlite! :)
Michael Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:49 AM
"What is its hymn to me" What would you make it be...a moment for all eternity...All the best Sunlite
Sharp Avatar
June 5, 2019 at 11:05 AM
Nice write, Sunlite... I particularly love those last two lines.
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