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Twilight's White

Twilight’s White Neath twilight’s white, There streaks a purple cloud, Where beneath designs the lace of trees, Against glorious orange and red of sunset. Here I stand in its shadow. What does it see that I cannot What is its hymn to me At the end of this day?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 6/25/2019 5:00:00 PM
Its a really beautiful poem and I really enjoyed reading it, especially the last stanza, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 6/14/2019 10:25:00 AM
What awesome streaks, nature's colours and imagery painted superbly in words in brevity wow. Kudos. Keep writing such delights forever poet. Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.
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Date: 6/13/2019 4:40:00 PM
each nightfall ends with a hummed psalm... beautiful verse, sun!..huggs
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Date: 6/6/2019 10:52:00 PM
Very Nice Sunlite! Beautiful write :)
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Date: 6/5/2019 6:01:00 PM
Beautiful Sunlite! :)
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Date: 6/5/2019 11:49:00 AM
"What is its hymn to me" What would you make it be...a moment for all eternity...All the best Sunlite
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Date: 6/5/2019 11:05:00 AM
Nice write, Sunlite... I particularly love those last two lines.
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