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Twilight Glow A twilight glow adorns the scene of mockingbirds singing a song in their menagerie, serene, while frangipani branches long, grant luscious fragrance of perfume thru velvety vermilion fronds. Pellucid mirror 'neath the moon reflects as ripples skate on ponds, while auras of ancestral views these splendid visions now infuse. Sandra M. Haight ~2nd Place~ Contest: 10 Words, 10 Lines Challenge Sponsor: Silent One Judged: 01/11/2018 Required words used in order of appearance: twilight, mockingbirds, menagerie, frangipani, luscious, vermilion, pellucid, ripples, ancestral, infuse

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John Hamilton

Date: 1/12/2018 9:44:00 AM

You amaze Sandra, I had to resort to a story to use these words without sounding forced, but you found a way to use them, and with a rhyme scheme also, very impressive, congrats on another fine win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, John, for your very positive and supportive comments. I appreciate them so much. Sandra

James Inman

Date: 1/12/2018 12:49:00 AM

I like this lovely write a lot Sandra. It leaves with beautiful images in my mind and a warm fuzzy feeling inside.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:16:00 PM

Thank you for stopping by, James, with your lovely, supportive comments. Much appreciated. Sandra

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/11/2018 7:26:00 PM

Returning with congratulations, Sandra, on your wonderful win with your enchanting write. Hugs and smiles ~Susan

Judith S

Date: 1/11/2018 7:19:00 PM

This is just beautiful Sandra!! I love the graphic as well. Makes me want to jump right into it :) Congratulations on your win!!! ~Judy

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:15:00 PM

Thank you very much, Judith, for your lovely comment and congrats. I was lucky to find a graphic that worked well! Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/11/2018 5:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Sandra. Well done.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:14:00 PM

Thank you again, Line! Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/11/2018 4:12:00 PM

Hi Sandra, You use given words to paint a beautiful scene. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis, for your wonderful comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2018 2:37:00 PM

Great imagery Sandra and great use of the ten words.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:13:00 PM

Thanks for a very thought-provoking contest, SO! And I so much appreciate my nice placement! Sandra

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/9/2018 8:37:00 AM

Excellent poem combining all ten words, Sandra, it sounds enchanting:)

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you very much, Jo! Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 1/9/2018 7:57:00 AM

beautiful sweet Sandra! You used all words perfectly, great rhythm and rhyme too good luck : )-luloo

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Laura! I appreciate your supportive comments. Hugs, Sandra

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/8/2018 8:46:00 PM

Absolute loveliness Sandra! You've painted the required words into the imagery of your sparkling poem beautifully. An enchanting write my friend. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:11:00 PM

Thank you very much, Susan, for your always inspiring and gracious comments. I so much appreciate your visits and uplifting words. Hugs, Sandra

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/8/2018 8:39:00 PM

Wow, how did you do that!? Awesome! You made perfection look so easy, Sandra.

Sandra Haight
Date: 1/12/2018 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Line. I was lucky that it fell into place for me! Hugs, Sandra