Twilight

Flashlamp tracings trap and dazzle,
dancing in the twilight. Children scatter
through the meadow, flip-flops flapping,
eager beavers chasing dreams.

Fast the flow, the stream blinks
back a hint of moonlight,
and the torches' criss cross patterns
splatter 'til the beams converge.

Nets are plied, and mason jars
are dunked beneath the rippling surface, 
small fish wriggle in confinement,
kids' excitement and delight.

Safe and snug, imaginations 
settle as they say goodnight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Collins Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 8:01 AM
Oh gosh, Keith. "Flip flops flapping" "fish wriggle in confinement." You are your own sweet original poet, but I cannot help but think of Dylan Thomas. I must read on. love, Kathy
Andresen Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 6:28 AM
..... small moments we enjoy ...... lovely written Keith! - (It is too early to say goodnight ....), but I will wish you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Roberts Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 11:53 PM
Hello Keith , Arthur sent me your way, I enjoyed your write will look at some more ....Seren
Bauer Avatar
April 18, 2013 at 3:38 PM
so vivid i could imagine being one of those children! you've really brought childhood to life in this charming poem. love it!
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