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Twilight

Flashlamp tracings trap and dazzle, dancing in the twilight. Children scatter through the meadow, flip-flops flapping, eager beavers chasing dreams. Fast the flow, the stream blinks back a hint of moonlight, and the torches' criss cross patterns splatter 'til the beams converge. Nets are plied, and mason jars are dunked beneath the rippling surface, small fish wriggle in confinement, kids' excitement and delight. Safe and snug, imaginations settle as they say goodnight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/30/2013 8:01:00 AM
Oh gosh, Keith. "Flip flops flapping" "fish wriggle in confinement." You are your own sweet original poet, but I cannot help but think of Dylan Thomas. I must read on. love, Kathy
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:28:00 AM
..... small moments we enjoy ...... lovely written Keith! - (It is too early to say goodnight ....), but I will wish you a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/18/2013 11:53:00 PM
Hello Keith , Arthur sent me your way, I enjoyed your write will look at some more ....Seren
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Date: 4/18/2013 3:38:00 PM
so vivid i could imagine being one of those children! you've really brought childhood to life in this charming poem. love it!
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