Twice On Sunday

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i hate that my heart beats fast at the thought of you AP: 1st place 2025 Posted on April 10, 2023

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Bill Baker

Date: 4/14/2023 1:43:00 PM

Anxiousness and/or anxiety can cause fear to build up in anticipation. Well written in so few words, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2023 5:47:00 PM

Thank you my Texan friend ~

Susan Lawrence

Date: 4/11/2023 8:05:00 AM

Line, so much said in a few words ! I love the vulnerability and honestly . I love the anticipation! All the best to you , Susan :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/11/2023 6:32:00 PM

Thanks, Susan ~ most appreciated