Twelve Thousand Miles

Already counting down the days
just forty ticks upon the wall,
it cannot come too soon for us
too many years have passed us by.


Just forty ticks upon the wall
twelve days to fill with memories,
twelve nights of sleep we’d rather not
twelve thousand miles of hopefulness. 

It cannot come too soon for us
these shores are too familiar now,
though gone the days of youthful romp
we’ll soon be rolling back the years.


Too many years have passed us by
since last we packed our cases tight,
three hundred hours of winter Sun 
just six more Fridays – and we’re gone.


Written and Posted October 13th 2015
For ‘Shall we Retourne?’ contest
Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Kendrick Avatar
November 27, 2015 at 3:14 PM
Shall We Retourne sounds like a tough one but you did it with this winner !!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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November 26, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Congrats on your win, Bill! Love, Kim
Guzzi Avatar
November 22, 2015 at 9:10 AM
I missed the holiday connection? Conrad's and thanks so much for trying & brilliantly succeeding at a new form!Light & Love
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November 21, 2015 at 11:28 PM
Bill, Congratulations on your win. ...Love SKAT
Guzzi Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 4:35 PM
Hi Bill, I really like this content.What a great job you did I can feel the longing. Would you please end your sentences with a period & only capitalize for proper nouns & for the beginning of a sentence! Light & Love
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