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Twe

One direction two turn Three arrows four the passing Of five-sixths and seven Eight Nine of ten E le v en The hammer f a l l s s r h t e i g a t n A w a l l o f s i l v e r g l a s s Between Vision and sight Authority and control Reality and perception Between Freedom and choice I and me Beauty and splendor The wall of finite eternity Between time And a clock that never struck twe—

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Date: 5/3/2009 1:31:00 PM
Stuart, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:35:00 PM
Very unusual and creative write here, Stuart and now it is a "first round survivor" ... smile ... good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Stuart. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:51:00 PM
creative, colourful piece....congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 11/19/2008 5:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Stuart. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/17/2008 12:05:00 PM
What an artistic and intereting poem. Enjoyed it. Congratulations on being featured this week. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/17/2008 9:21:00 AM
Congrats Stuart on "TWE" being featured. Vince
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Date: 11/17/2008 6:20:00 AM
Great, imginative poem! Very interesting format and write. congratulations on being featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 11/17/2008 4:02:00 AM
hi Stuart, this is VERY VERY CLEVER and imaginative. lainie
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