Turn Coat

The apricot sunlight of an early fall afternoon caresses an empty picnic table. A still pine forest exhales, expending its essence on the rising moon. Walkers warm in fleece pace, each stride distressing the fallen needles, and the wayward squirrel nut in cheek. Geese attend the lake’s edge, their arched necks appearing to question each wayward breeze which disturbs the still waters of the pond. The playground now empty of its wiggling little ones, sighs forlornly, as its chains are aired in a whistle-like concord. So, the day ends at the golden hour, peacefully, awaiting the turning of the maples leafs. *The fine line is between the end of summer and the beginning of fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:47 PM
You are an artist with a pen(or key board?) or a juggler with the words!!Congratulations Debbie on your win.
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Debbie
Devonshire Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:29 AM
Beautifully written, Deb. I felt like I was watching all of this with you. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:09 AM
Beautifully written, I really enjoyed this poem. Excellent. Lee
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 8:52 PM
Love your word combinations and the way they dance lightly on either side of the line! Another first-class poem, Debbie, thanks so much for supporting my contest. Beauty weekend to ya, Namaste~N
Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 8:49 AM
Thanks Nan I bless the Light in YOU too!
Brown Avatar
September 27, 2011 at 9:54 AM
I am stopping by your wonderful poetry today to thank you for your kind comments on my writing Debbie. Hope you have an inspiration filled week. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
September 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM
Enjoyed this easy write you have created Debbi, i shall have to take a country walk now i have read this..
Onclaud Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 6:18 AM
soup mail..
Smith Avatar
September 21, 2011 at 12:15 AM
Delightful imagery.
La France Avatar
September 20, 2011 at 9:16 PM
This is lovely Debbie, so visual, I felt I was there. I want to thank you so much for the Honorable Mention in your Children contest, I am very proud and honored to be among these wonderful poems and fine poets ~~
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September 20, 2011 at 7:50 PM
wow mesmerizing and intoxicating lines Debbie.. a brilliant portrait painted with this dynamic poetry ..luv the flow and the grace of this piece luv...
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