Tucked Into His Heart

Across uneven terrain
  tightrope-walking
narrow mountain passes
  dodging sniper fire

He carries her picture
  tucked into his heart
From that wrinkled photo
  his thoughts ne'er depart
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Baker Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 5:03 PM
War is hell, Gershon. Especially unnecessary war. Touching poem, very timely. My prayers are with those willing to risk everything for freedom and democracy. I hope we're not headed into war here in the U.S.A. (civil war). A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 12:05 PM
Gershon, A well written poem, the words. "Tucked in his heart." touching. (FAV) Blessings ~ Debra
Krutsinger Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 10:59 AM
What a romantic you are, and you do it so well on a page Gershon!
Sands Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 5:50 AM
Love not lessened by distance or war. Well written Gershon. Take care :)
George Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:32 PM
This is a pathetic picture of the war victims who have lost their dear ones.... but whose memory they hold dear to heart. Life is a tight rope walk and love alone motivates us to move forward....Touching write !
M  Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 11:06 PM
Awww Gershon that’s lovely! Debx
Seeker Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 9:53 PM
My father was in the army and fought in many wars … I can relate with what you’re saying
Roper Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 9:19 PM
Great visual, Gershon, unfair what is going on..
Boles Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 9:05 PM
Love endures even in extreme situations, your poem evokes. I do believe that hope transcends defeat G.W...ab
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Your belief sure is better than 'defeat transcending 'hope,' Anselmo!
Wolf Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:15 PM
Your belief sure is better than 'defeat transcending 'hope,' Anselmo!
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