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Trust - Just a Five Letter Word

Trust Can make Or break a Relationship A lifetime of Happiness wiped away By one mistake, that is All it takes to turn love into Hate, loved ones into foes and destroy Happy homes, now places where secrets reign

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/18/2010 2:00:00 PM

Amazing really how this 5 letter word can hold so much weight in a relationship-- once it's shattered it's just hard to piece things together but I also am a firm believer of 2nd chances--wonderful etheree you have here yay for you for trying out this form :) -- hugs nikko :)

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 11/16/2010 2:51:00 PM

Wilma, This is so true, and as much as we would like to think that after losing it we can get past it. Well, it doesn't happen. Enjoyed your write so much As Always Shar

David Smalling

Date: 11/16/2010 6:48:00 AM

I wrote two poems today, and trust was the theme. You are right in every way, we do not trust as much as we dream.

Julie Conerly

Date: 11/15/2010 2:43:00 PM

I'm!. not sure what an etheree is but I like it Very profound wording.

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/15/2010 4:14:00 AM

So true, Wilma, but everyone need a second chance although this might be very hard sometimes. So well written!!! Enjoyed the read!...Gert :)

James Fraser

Date: 11/14/2010 11:55:00 AM

Trust is one of the fundamental basis of any relationship, once that's broken, it's very hard to repair. Perfect Etheree Wilma >> James :)

Sena Slaughter

Date: 11/14/2010 10:00:00 AM

It is so sad that so many relationships fail because of lack of trust! Thank you for sharing.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/13/2010 12:15:00 PM

That trust can be built fairly easy but once there is a breech in the levee it is hard to buld it back for it is broken for sure..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/13/2010 11:54:00 AM

Good one, Wilma. Yes, many homes breaking apart, and often for insanely small reasons. Hope you are doing great today. LUv, Andrea Hey the capcha says "NDRA"almost like me. haha

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/13/2010 10:26:00 AM

Outstanding, Wilma. Great message. Thanks for your kind words. xxxRalph

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/13/2010 9:04:00 AM

Once that trust is broken, it's hard to restore, Wilma. Sometimes we find forgiveness but forgetting is much more difficult. Excellent poem, dear friend. Love, Carolyn

Sheri Fresonke Harper

Date: 11/12/2010 10:50:00 AM

I like the way the words keep falling on each line like the family breaking apart:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/11/2010 5:05:00 AM

Why love only? I think every virtue or atribute depends upon trust, Nice Etheree

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/11/2010 4:45:00 AM

So true are the words, been there as you can see in my poetry...Its like falling off a ladder, from the high to he low...excellent form and work my dear..Love Michael