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True Passion - a Collaboration With Darren White:

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Don't fight true passion living in your heart, Attracted like a moth to scorching flame, Try as you may, but you shall never tame, You'll fail and fall before you even start. Rise from the embers to begin as new, Your soul a phoenix, burning in the night, In darkest hours illuminate so bright All rainbow spectrum colours that pass through, Land at your desk, begin to understand How burning bright can be a brand new day In scratching strokes of pen on paper white With craftsmanship, you guide your doubting hand Write all your fears, write inner pain away Let poems and music guide you to the light
(Iambic Pentameter)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/16/2017 10:22:00 PM
Wow this is more than awesome it has that thing
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Date: 5/30/2017 3:51:00 PM
Rick and Darren, this is a wonderful message you have penned together. Great collaboration of thoughts and feelings !!
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Date: 5/29/2017 11:36:00 PM
Congratulations WW and Darren, what a great collaboration. It speaks of Hope, and as you say in your last line 'let poems and music guide you to the light', that is brilliant....... Maria
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White Wolf
Date: 5/29/2017 11:40:00 PM
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks, Maria /|\
Date: 5/29/2017 10:51:00 PM
Oh, I love this one Budgie - especially the last line <3
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White Wolf
Date: 5/29/2017 10:54:00 PM
Thank you very much, Sara /|\
Date: 5/29/2017 6:48:00 PM
Hi Rick, You and Darren wrote a great collaboration. I agree with your thoughts on poetry and music. For they both do wonders to heart and soul. Excellent job from the both of you.
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White Wolf
Date: 5/29/2017 6:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis! Darren is a joy to write with /|\
Date: 5/29/2017 4:04:00 AM
- Was wonderful to read you too, W.W. and Darren :) - A cheerful and lovely poem :) - Best wishes for a great Monday - double hugs // Anne- Lise :)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/29/2017 4:09:00 AM
Thank you very much, same to you /|\
Date: 5/29/2017 3:51:00 AM
Was wonderful to write with you, Budgie my friend, as always :)
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Darren White
Date: 5/29/2017 4:55:00 AM
:)
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White Wolf
Date: 5/29/2017 3:53:00 AM
The pleasure was all mine, dear one /|\

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