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True Love Waits

True Love Waits - Sonnet One You tear my heart to pieces with your eyes that wander where they shouldn't when with me. You shred my soul with all your little lies you think I will accept...this cannot be. A heart that wanders I will not accept; my confidence you weaken with your acts. Your selfish ways do not earn my respect, and so my hurt and jealousy react. True love does not leave loved ones in dismay of guessing how their life and needs fit in; one moment being sure you'll not betray; another, feeling hurt, unloved within. And so, goodbye...I need that special one with eyes for me alone...and now we're done. ----------------------------------------------------- True Love Waits - Sonnet Two You thrill my heart to pieces with your eyes that fill my soul when you look into me. I realize you guard me with white lies... protect me from my fears that should not be. My jealous heart must change to now accept those misinterpreted, annoying acts you do so naturally with full respect when lovely women pass and you react. My heart should not be feeling sad dismay; to look is not the same as moving in with actions that could lead to a betray; for, with no doubt, I feel your love within. Let's try again, you are my only one... this jealousy I put to rest...it's done. Sandra M. Haight ~4th Place~ Contest: True Love Waits - Two English Sonnets Sponsor: Phillip Garcia Judged: 01/19/20917 I used the same ending words for both Sonnets

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Date: 1/20/2017 7:40:00 PM
Congrats on your placement! beautiful poem :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:25:00 PM
Thank you very much, Claudia. Sandra
Date: 1/20/2017 4:43:00 PM
Congratulations Sandra on you win with this lovely poem. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caryl. Sandra
Date: 1/19/2017 11:54:00 PM
Coming back with congratulations for you :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thanks again, Darren. Sandra
Date: 1/19/2017 8:18:00 PM
Tremendous, Sandra! You always seem to evoke powerful emotions in a fluid manner that makes your poetry easily flow while being intensely deep - this was no exception. Congratulations on your placement and thank you for participating
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Phillip, for the very inspirational contest. I am please that you like my poems and I appreciate my fine placement! Sandra
Date: 10/25/2016 3:34:00 AM
This is wonderful, so well written! Good luck in the contest :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Darren. Sandra
Date: 9/26/2016 3:02:00 AM
beautiful thank you
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/21/2017 7:23:00 PM
Thank you very much, Talin, for your nice comment. Sandra
Date: 9/24/2016 11:11:00 AM
Hello! The First Sonnet is truely sky touching. You have painted this wonderful write with great loving emotions. Your writing technique is just fabulous. Second Sonnet is heart - touching. Singing a song for calling back the love. Brilliant job. Well, at least I can say this could be in top 5 in the contest. Best of luck. And have nice day. 7/7 Stars
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2016 8:15:00 PM
Augustus, thank you very much for stopping by to read my poem and leave such lovely and supportive comments and high rating. I appreciate this so much. Sandra
Date: 9/24/2016 9:04:00 AM
Wow! Two interlocking Sonnets with the same rhyming scheme. +7 at least. Barry
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barry, for your supportive comments and nice rating. Sandra
Date: 9/24/2016 5:54:00 AM
Wonderful two sonnets on true love ...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2016 8:17:00 PM
Thank you very much, Probir. I appreciate your visits and wonderful support. Sandra

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