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Andaree

Created by Andrea Dietrich with a rhyming scheme AaBbCbcbbaA. The first line and the last line are both the same 11- syllable line. This form decreases in line length with each line getting progressively smaller by 2 syllables until reaching the one-syllable word in the middle of the poem. Then each of the lines increase progressively by 2 syllables until the final line of eleven syllables is met: (11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11). The middle word should be a word very important to the theme. It appears somewhere in the title or can be the title itself and that middle word also rhymes with lines 3 4 8 and 9. Centering the poem is also recommended for an hourglass effect!

The one thing that all humans crave most of all is the feeling of being loved by a person that you love too nothing else will do that much is true it feels great when someone loves you there’s no reason to feel blue for your lonely heart has been given the one thing that all humans crave most of all (Non rhyme-Andaree)

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John Hamilton

Date: 1/16/2018 10:04:00 AM

I see congrats are in order Emile, on this very worthy POTD. I enjoyed the poem immensely, and I am intrigued by the form, too bad Andaree is not made an official form!!

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/16/2018 12:24:00 PM

Thanks John, I agree that "Andaree" is an interesting form and should be recognized as such. Your support is always most welcome my friend, Emile.

John Fleming

Date: 1/3/2018 2:29:00 PM

Finally caught up with you, Emile! May I take the opportunity of wishing you a very happy New Year...let it be a most productive and contented one. My warmest regards! :) john P.s Well done on POTD!! :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 1/3/2018 6:10:00 PM

Thank you John, a simple thank you doesn’t seem sufficient, however I offer it with my sincerest gratitude, may the coming year be a happy one my friend, Emile.

Anna Hopper

Date: 12/19/2017 12:37:00 PM

Fabulous!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/19/2017 6:47:00 PM

Thanks Anna, have a very Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

Maria Williams

Date: 12/19/2017 6:04:00 AM

Beautiful Emile. Congratulations on POTD...Maria

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/19/2017 6:13:00 AM

Thanks Maria, I appreciate your support, have a Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/18/2017 9:11:00 PM

Wow POTD Emile with Andrea's Andaree poetry form! She will be happy too. Congratulations on this wonderful write being honored with POTD! : )

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/19/2017 6:12:00 AM

Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments and wish you and yours a very Merry Christmas my friend, Emile

Eve Roper

Date: 12/18/2017 3:06:00 PM

Beautiful, Emile, congratulations on POTD

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 4:52:00 PM

Thank you Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/18/2017 2:30:00 PM

- Beautiful, Emile - Congratulations with p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 3:03:00 PM

Thank you Sunshine, like your name you bring light to my day, Emile.

Ghita Manaila

Date: 12/18/2017 1:19:00 PM

It is very difficult to find true love,but not imposible. Thanks for these wonderful words.Best wishes.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 1:30:00 PM

Thank you Ghita, I appreciate your support, Emile.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 12/18/2017 9:49:00 AM

If you find true love, you are the richest of the richest! Lovely poem. Congratulations.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 1:02:00 PM

Thanks Sunlight, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/18/2017 9:00:00 AM

Hi Emile, We all long to find true love. You stated that fact well. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 1:01:00 PM

Thanks Alexis, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/18/2017 8:12:00 AM

What a unique form! Timeless message :) enjoyed! Congratulations my friend xomo

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Maureen, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/18/2017 7:32:00 AM

aww Emile this is a lovely sentiment and yes its what so many people desire is to find somebody to love:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks Jan, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

James Swartz

Date: 12/18/2017 6:49:00 AM

A beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD!

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 8:18:00 AM

Thanks James, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2017 5:19:00 AM

Congrata on POTD

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/18/2017 8:17:00 AM

Thanks Silent One, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/17/2017 10:01:00 AM

Hello Emile!! I really like this one. You've done a magnificent job in making this "Andaree" form (from Andrea) come alive with this "True Love" theme. Superb Work, and A FAVE too!! Best Wishes, Gary

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/17/2017 10:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Gary, your comments are like a warm hug my friend, have a very Merry Christmas, Emile.