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Andaree

Created by Andrea Dietrich with a rhyming scheme AaBbCbcbbaA. The first line and the last line are both the same 11- syllable line. This form decreases in line length with each line getting progressively smaller by 2 syllables until reaching the one-syllable word in the middle of the poem. Then each of the lines increase progressively by 2 syllables until the final line of eleven syllables is met: (11/9/7/5/3/1/3/5/7/9/11). The middle word should be a word very important to the theme. It appears somewhere in the title or can be the title itself and that middle word also rhymes with lines 3 4 8 and 9. Centering the poem is also recommended for an hourglass effect!

Being Loved

The one thing that all humans crave most of all
is the feeling of being loved by
a person that you love too
nothing else will do
that much is
true 
it feels great
when someone loves you
there’s no reason to feel blue
for your lonely heart has been given 
the one thing that all humans crave most of all




(Non rhyme-Andaree)

Copyright © Emile Pinet | Year Posted 2017

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January 16, 2018 at 10:04 AM

I see congrats are in order Emile, on this very worthy POTD. I enjoyed the poem immensely, and I am intrigued by the form, too bad Andaree is not made an official form!!

January 16, 2018 at 12:24 PM

Thanks John, I agree that "Andaree" is an interesting form and should be recognized as such. Your support is always most welcome my friend, Emile.

January 3, 2018 at 2:29 PM

Finally caught up with you, Emile! May I take the opportunity of wishing you a very happy New Year...let it be a most productive and contented one. My warmest regards! :) john P.s Well done on POTD!! :)

January 3, 2018 at 6:10 PM

Thank you John, a simple thank you doesn’t seem sufficient, however I offer it with my sincerest gratitude, may the coming year be a happy one my friend, Emile.

December 19, 2017 at 12:37 PM

Fabulous!

December 19, 2017 at 6:47 PM

Thanks Anna, have a very Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

December 19, 2017 at 6:04 AM

Beautiful Emile. Congratulations on POTD...Maria

December 19, 2017 at 6:13 AM

Thanks Maria, I appreciate your support, have a Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

December 18, 2017 at 9:11 PM

Wow POTD Emile with Andrea's Andaree poetry form! She will be happy too. Congratulations on this wonderful write being honored with POTD! : )

December 19, 2017 at 6:12 AM

Thanks Connie, I appreciate your comments and wish you and yours a very Merry Christmas my friend, Emile

December 18, 2017 at 3:06 PM

Beautiful, Emile, congratulations on POTD

December 18, 2017 at 4:52 PM

Thank you Eve, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 18, 2017 at 2:30 PM

- Beautiful, Emile - Congratulations with p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

December 18, 2017 at 3:03 PM

Thank you Sunshine, like your name you bring light to my day, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 1:19 PM

It is very difficult to find true love,but not imposible. Thanks for these wonderful words.Best wishes.

December 18, 2017 at 1:30 PM

Thank you Ghita, I appreciate your support, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 9:49 AM

If you find true love, you are the richest of the richest! Lovely poem. Congratulations.

December 18, 2017 at 1:02 PM

Thanks Sunlight, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 9:00 AM

Hi Emile, We all long to find true love. You stated that fact well. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day:-) Alexis

December 18, 2017 at 1:01 PM

Thanks Alexis, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 18, 2017 at 8:12 AM

What a unique form! Timeless message :) enjoyed! Congratulations my friend xomo

December 18, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Maureen, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 7:32 AM

aww Emile this is a lovely sentiment and yes its what so many people desire is to find somebody to love:-) congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx

December 18, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks Jan, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 6:49 AM

A beautiful poem. Congratulations on POTD!

December 18, 2017 at 8:18 AM

Thanks James, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

December 18, 2017 at 5:19 AM

Congrata on POTD

December 18, 2017 at 8:17 AM

Thanks Silent One, your support is always welcome my friend, Emile.

December 17, 2017 at 10:01 AM

Hello Emile!! I really like this one. You've done a magnificent job in making this "Andaree" form (from Andrea) come alive with this "True Love" theme. Superb Work, and A FAVE too!! Best Wishes, Gary

December 17, 2017 at 10:13 AM

Thank you so much Gary, your comments are like a warm hug my friend, have a very Merry Christmas, Emile.

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