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vision of her is quite vivid, elegant in stance, style, substance, flash of smile, arms on hip rigid! my glance back at her was timid, fell in love with her twice my age!! was I shot - by cross eyed cupid? her sharp eyes lingered on my face, she might read my mind like devil, walks up to me all beauty, grace! what is the wisdom of this love? a case of oedipus complex! or is she eagle on a dove? years past, will never know the truth, both wallow in true happiness! did her age gain or did my youth? in romance it is always best, to let all good things just to be, and let fate in time put to test! 4th place written 17/10/2020 Sponsor Constance la France Tercets poetry contest AxA BxB rhyme 8 syllables each line 6 stanzas

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:55:00 AM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my Tercet Challenge with this wonderful write _Constance
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/1/2020 10:02:00 AM
Thanks constance! Pleased you thought of it well! Much appreciate your visit and your sponsorship of this interesting contest!:)
Date: 11/1/2020 12:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Krish. Hugs Eve
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/1/2020 12:34:00 AM
Thanks Eve! thanks for stopping by! hugs krish
Date: 10/31/2020 12:17:00 PM
Love this one Krish. Subtly sweet. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/31/2020 12:53:00 PM
Thanks Linda! so very happy to get your positive words!
Date: 10/31/2020 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/31/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Joanna! Much appreciate your visit!:)
Date: 10/31/2020 11:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Krish :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/31/2020 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! happy I got a mention! hugs Krish
Date: 10/31/2020 10:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Krish!!!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 10/31/2020 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Mark! A different theme, I wanted to create!

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