Trip To the Beach

Mum and Dad wake early on a hot summer morning.
"We should take the kids to the beach", "Gee you could have given me some warning".
"You know taking them to the beach is really such a mission".
"Well you could pack the rods and maybe do a bit of fishin'

Dad is out at the car with all the stuff, trying to cram.
He looks up on the deck and see's the, truck sized pram.
Starts all over again, playing tetris with the boot.
The fishing rods won't fit in so the question is moot.

With the esky all packed with lunch and drinks for the day,
the car starts up and they are all on their way.
Not five minutes out and the kids have already started.
Maddie yells, "Put the window down Dad, Brendan just farted".

Going over the mountains and Katie looks green around the gills.
Without any warning, from her little mouth spew spills.
Lauren's weak tummy cannot handle the smell
and within a few seconds her mouth lets lose as well.

Two hours and four stops later the beach car park is found.
Sun cream applied, bathers on before beachward bound.
Dad loaded up like a walking coat rack,
Katie asks politely, "Can I climb on your back?"

At the end of the day mum and dad are just beat.
Ice cream, sand, salt and kids are on the seats.
The car pulls out and we are on our way home.
Maybe this will get easier when the kids have all grown.
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Cresswell Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 8:44 PM
I remember those times though for us it was the Welland Canal. I think its is comforting to know how similar we all are inspire of our differences. Such a well told heartwarming tale. Thank you.
Emu Avatar
September 22, 2017 at 3:47 AM
It's true, parenting is similar globally, All the best Patricia.
Maverick Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Well Charles Dickens did say it is better to travel hopefully than to arrive, I don't know quite how well you think that auguments this poem though Craig.? has the trip ended I guess is a good allegory LOL))
Emu Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:05 PM
ha, always look back and it's all good. Cheers
Daniel Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 1:43 AM
Ha ha, enjoyed the read, Craig, kids sure can keep you up on your toes all the time:)
Ajmal Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 4:44 PM
It was a nice and well written poem so however I ve posted my new poem once we were child and i wanted you to read it as it is new and exceptionaly beautiful even better then my first two poems which got more then 100 views
Emu Avatar
May 5, 2017 at 4:45 PM
Thanks Faraz, I will check it out, cheers
Borke Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Well said! Most families identify with the experience
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 4:27 PM
Thanks for the visit to my page Hannah
Downing  Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:29 AM
Definitely a fun story. Pleasure to read it this morning. :)
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 4:28 PM
Cheers Akkina,
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:49 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed your write, Graig! Well done!
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 5:45 AM
thanks for the visit.
Andresen Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 2:44 AM
- A fun story ... after all, one day to remember with a smile Craig - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 5:46 AM
They always are Anne-Lise. Cheers
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 7:36 PM
Who hasn't made one of these trips? Great read Craig, well done...
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Wouldn't be too many charlie. Thanks for the visit
Chircop Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 6:39 PM
You described a wonderful adventure..It might be tiring for the parents..but one day they look back at such days with tears int their eyes..wishing how wonderful it could be to go back there onceagain and stop time.Fantastic story..and coming from a mom of a handful four year old girl..Its greatly appreciated. :)
Emu Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Ha you are right. All mine are grown up now and we still go together. You have it all to look forward to!
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 4:22 PM
The imagery in this delightful poem made me smile remembering a few outings where things went wrong but we still had fun (like getting lost). The descriptive humor in this piece is outstanding! 7 ; )
Emu Avatar
April 23, 2017 at 4:49 AM
Ha, It is always fun going to the beach, its the coming home that hurts. Thanks Connie for you visit.
Ricci Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 10:25 AM
Yes it will. (lol) Good Morning Craig. This is lovely and so hits home with me. I grew up with numbers trips and days to the beach with the family and packing everything up even when we had a beach house the ocean itself. Your words and entries bring back marvelous times. And now we take our parents for the day and yes pack everything up. Your entry was clear and vivid and we readers were all in the scene looking on. Wonderful in its entirety.
Emu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 2:38 PM
Thanks for the visit and your kind words
Flannery Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 5:21 AM
Beautiful little story. What our parents went through for us. Even when things went bad they trudge through it in creating wonderful mememories for us. God Bless.
Emu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 6:13 AM
Yes and the cycle repeats! Thanks for the visit
Williams Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 11:25 PM
Haha, a fun poem that we can all relate to at some time or other. Believe me it does get easier.
Emu Avatar
April 22, 2017 at 6:14 AM
It does Maria, except when you have to carry the grandchildren
Deo Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 5:21 PM
I did read this, today I have time to say Hello Maties! Shalom (shabbat Shalom in Jesus Christ) Anil Deo
Emu Avatar
April 21, 2017 at 5:27 PM
And to you mate. Thanks for the visit.
La France Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 6:31 PM
Craig, I really enjoyed this fun write, poor dad loaded up like a walking coat rack, that line made me burst out laughing, well done.
Emu Avatar
April 17, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Thanks for the visit.
Allison Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 4:11 PM
Great humour Craig:-) I loved the sights and sounds and smells of the journey - I could picture it all so vividly in my minds eye and the relief at the end of the journey I am sure many parents can relate to:-) hugs Jan xx7
Emu Avatar
April 16, 2017 at 4:31 PM
Thanks for the visit Jan.
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