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In the forest I am with my tribe of wood and leaf, among the giants whose roots hug the earth. It is a place of ancient souls, of the creatures who dwell with the sweet sounds of moving water and bird song.
statuesque, you guard the entrance to the wood with your cloak of red green that shimmers in the sunlight, glowing with the luster of emeralds. from your rich powerful branches the glistening leaves sprawl out in a secret semaphore to the wood beyond your roots are planted firm and deep. within the brown earth, around them a swirling profusion of buttercups and hyacinths, and the less admired daisies and dandelions, all dance at your feet in a serenade of tribute. here where the bracken is thick and curled, shaping the path by denying easy access, and the stream that waters the wood keeps life flowing on where minnows find their home within. you, sentinel of the forest, protect the life within it; all who seek to enter must first pass your guardianship.

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Date: 2/3/2024 7:59:00 AM
A worthy beautiful tribute to trees and nature Sara….Debx
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/3/2024 6:05:00 PM
thank you kindly, Deb...hope you're having a pleasant weekend, hugs, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 7:28:00 PM
Felt the deep connection and reverence coming through in this poem. Captured the spirit and presence .....tip toed so that I did not disturb a single leaf.
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Date: 2/2/2024 3:53:00 PM
thank you, Paul, for treading lightly so as not to disturb the trees and the silence. Thank you for your visit and delightful words...have a splendid weekend, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 6:40:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to trees. Our magnificent guardians of life's gardens
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/2/2024 3:53:00 PM
thanks, Jerry, for your visit and complimentary words...enjoy the upcoming weekend, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 5:32:00 PM
A worthy tribute to trees and tree life! Enjoyed!
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/2/2024 3:52:00 PM
thank you, Paige...I appreciate your thoughtful words...glad you enjoyed my poem...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 3:56:00 PM
A fine tribute to the tree, my Sara. Many things to admire about trees, you've chosen a meaningful few and done them justice. The image is a great match for your poetry. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. Write On, my favorite. Bill
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 4:02:00 PM
thank you, dear hubby, for joining me on the tree-lined trail. I'm always delighted that you read my work and comment on it. You're my favorite...and my Baker bard!
Date: 2/1/2024 12:27:00 PM
Dear sweet sara, as i read this i felt like i was walking with you, you took me on a journey, and i felt and saw those hyacinths and less admired daisies and dandelions, as well as the waters that stream, and flow, how beautiful are your words, the way you paint imagery is so delicately captivating and awe inspiring! Just beyond soulful and moving. I love also the ending. And picture goes so well with the poem too. Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light today and always. Fave it is
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:43:00 PM
thanks for walking with me today and for soaking up the sights and sounds of the woods.I appreciate your enthusiastic and mindful comments. You're so kind, and I'm grateful for you...also, humbled by the fave. Wishing you a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 11:54:00 AM
Love the idea of a statuesque tree guarding the forest, and I love trees, all varieties have their own characteristics. Covered in leaves or stark after fall, I still love them one and all. A lovely creation Dear Sara… Blessings, Beryl
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:44:00 PM
thanks for visiting the woods with me and for taking it all in....have loved trees since I was a child...my dad taught me a lot about trees. Have a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 11:42:00 AM
Your wonderful poem is a testament to the enduring power and beauty of the natural world, inviting readers to pause and appreciate the quiet majesty of the forest and its guardians. It is a gentle reminder of our interconnectedness with the earth and the importance of honouring and preserving its wonders.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:45:00 PM
I appreciate your visit, Silent One. I'm grateful you saw the message of the 'interconnectedness' we share with the earth, especially trees...gotta love trees! Wishing you a splendid evening, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 9:56:00 AM
Nice poem on nature from tree's perspective. Beautiful write.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:46:00 PM
thanks, Jay, for your visit and for your complimentary words. Appreciate you, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 8:27:00 AM
I agree wholeheartedly with the love of trees. What a pity so many are being cut off and no new ones are sown as replacements. A smooth and lovely poem.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:47:00 PM
thank you, Victor, for visiting. I agree with you -- when widening the county road behind our home, this large, ancient oak tree was 'sized down'--I swear I heard it crying... :-)
Date: 2/1/2024 8:07:00 AM
You have exhibited an astounding talent by crafting words that inspire and captivate readers, Dear Sara. Your ability to create vivid imagery leaves readers in awe. Numerous lines within your work resonated with me, and the overall flow of your writing was exceptionally smooth.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:49:00 PM
thank you, kind Sotto, for your visit and for your kind words about my craftsmanship with this poem. I'm grateful that many of the lines resonated with you...I'm delighted! Appreciate you and your thoughtful words. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 2/1/2024 7:22:00 AM
Ahh!! Descriptive and soothing is the lines in this one. Thank you for showing us the forest from one tree's perspective. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:50:00 PM
awww, thank you, Sara K, for your sincere appreciation from the 'trees' perspective. Grateful for your visit, Sara B
Date: 2/1/2024 6:43:00 AM
Dear Sara, I felt like living midst the tribe of wood, as, your phraseology and poetic skills here are absolutely fascinating.. I love your descriptions throughout and they work like a healing harmony.. "glowing with the luster of emeralds", "around them a swirling profusion of buttercups and hyacinths" Ah, so gorgeous. There's depth and so profound insight in your words, which conveys feelings very exquisitely! A brilliant write. Sending you many best wishes and light ~ :)
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/1/2024 3:51:00 PM
dearest Hiya--I'm so grateful for your complimentary words about my poetic skills!!! I'm delighted you enjoyed the beauty I hoped to create as well as some depth and insight. Your words are always uplifting and encouraging. Thank you...have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara

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