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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ treetops are the stage for birds as they perform their sunset chorus

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Paige Hind

Date: 2/9/2024 1:08:00 PM

This is lovely! And lovely to see your husband commenting on your work! A blessing to you and him! :)

Bill Baker

Date: 2/6/2024 6:30:00 PM

Lovely Monoku poem and picture, Sara. The birds and your words are both beautiful. Love, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/7/2024 5:03:00 AM

awww, thank you dear hubby! beautiful like your soul :-)

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/6/2024 11:01:00 AM

Dear Sara, this Monoku is truly remarkable! The intricacy of these creatures and their perching abilities is truly captivating. Although I understand the scientific principles behind flight, it never fails to evoke a sense of awe and wonder. May you be blessed.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 6:01:00 PM

I appreciate your visit, kind Sotto. I agree...even though science explains the principles of flight, birds just amaze me...tiny creatures capable of flying...! We have a bird bath outside my office window...I can become distracted, mesmerized by their activity. Have a blessed evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Buhagiar Victor

Date: 2/6/2024 8:55:00 AM

Incredibly beautiful even if concise.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 5:59:00 PM

thank you, Victor. Grateful for your visit and comments, Sara

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/6/2024 3:59:00 AM

Dear Sara, This sweet monoku is so lovely. In so few words it captures the melodious and precious gift of birds.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 4:48:00 AM

thank you, Nancy. I appreciate you stopping by and for your lovely comments. Have a pleasant day, hugs, Sara

Ink Empress

Date: 2/6/2024 2:36:00 AM

Wow i commented earlier but got lost in thin air. I was pointing out how beautiful this is and creative of you to think of trees as the stage where birds sing “ chorus of sunset@ and sunsets are my fave hour and to visualize this scene youv described in few words truly is magical and calming for the soul, your way with delivering imagery and taking us readers to a place so beautiful through your words is what i admire the most and ive nevr read anywhere, as tree being a stage. So good! FAVE

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 4:51:00 AM

thanks, dearest Ink, for your enthusiastic comments. I also enjoy the singing chorus at sunset...so captivating, almost magical. Sometimes I feel as if I'm witnessing a miracle. Glad you liked the 'stage' line..means a lot that you did. I'm also humbly grateful for the fave! I appreciate your beautiful soul and support...hugs for the day, Sara

Joe Dimino

Date: 2/5/2024 8:30:00 PM

Fascinating creatures and perches. I know the physics involved, but flight nevertheless always seems a mystical performance. Blessings. Well said.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 4:49:00 AM

thank you, Joe. I appreciate your visit -- yes, birds do seem mystical, almost tiny pieces of the miraculous. enjoy your day, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/5/2024 7:25:00 PM

A poem of a pretty scenario. Birds light up the world.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/6/2024 4:48:00 AM

I agree...birds do lighten up the world and our days. Have a great day, Sara

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/5/2024 6:14:00 PM

Never thought of a treetop that way, Sara. Interesting perspective. ~ Warbling Wolf

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 2/5/2024 6:17:00 PM

thank you, Warbling, for your visit and comments...hope you have a splendid evening, Sara